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NashP7
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2024-09-11 16:55

So far this has been a lot of fun to read, I’m a sucker for any football novel so this came about at the perfect time. I like the references to real players and as you read you can tell the author has a passion for football too. It’s still pretty early but I highly recommend people read this. The only minor criticism I had with it is there are a couple grammar & spelling mistakes but it’s not that deep, can always be corrected later!

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Heavenmonarch_
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Thanks man. About the spelling errors, if you see any please call my attention to it. I must've missed a few when I proofread.

NashP7
NashP7Lv14

No problem I will do, I wasn’t sure whether to comment on them or not.

Heavenmonarch_:Thanks man. About the spelling errors, if you see any please call my attention to it. I must've missed a few when I proofread.
Haku_Ouroboros
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There are no real players?? (Google translate)

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