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Fernizer
FernizerLv146mth
2024-10-14 23:02

How the heck did it get all those 5 stars? I don't know. I read 10 chapters and I can't help but wonder why the heck am I even reading this. It's all over the place, whetever it is plot, characters, or world building. Wouldn't recommend, at most 4/10.

Campione: Strongest Godslayer!

DragonnX
4.6
276 Chs

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Elvenerable
ElvenerableLv2

Lo leei hasta a la actualidad y razón hay demasiado rápido aún que es solo trabajo de traducción, lo que deja ver su buen trabajo de traducir la obra

6mth
Fernizer
FernizerLv14

English please. I can't understand you and app doesn't allow to copy or directly translate text.

Elvenerable:Lo leei hasta a la actualidad y razón hay demasiado rápido aún que es solo trabajo de traducción, lo que deja ver su buen trabajo de traducir la obra
6mth
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Fernizer
FernizerLv14

Okay I will write it in English and then put it into google translate for spanish version. I haven't mentioned the translation itself, because it seemed decent if a bit... automatic? I may be oversensitive but it feels like your usuall "throw it into a translation tool and then edit what cames out" nothing amazing but it good enough to read. You say there is a reason that it is too fast? I don't mind fast-paced story, I wouldn't have a problem with that as long as it was written properly. But this is the problem I have with this story - the way it is written. I'm reading it and I don't feel excited for the next chapter, I feel annoyed. I don't feel any interest in the main character he is more irritating to me than anything. I try to focus on the plot, but it doesn't make much sense in those 10 chpaters. I have questions about the story, but I don't feel like it would be interesting to find the answers. versión en español Está bien, lo escribiré en inglés y luego lo pondré en el traductor de Google para la versión en español. No he mencionado la traducción en sí, porque me pareció decente, aunque un poco... ¿automática? Puede que sea demasiado sensible, pero parece el típico "arrojarlo a una herramienta de traducción y luego editar lo que salió", nada del otro mundo, pero es lo suficientemente bueno para leer. ¿Dices que hay una razón por la que es demasiado rápido? No me importa la historia de ritmo rápido, no tendría ningún problema con eso siempre que esté escrita correctamente. Pero este es el problema que tengo con esta historia: la forma en que está escrita. La estoy leyendo y no me siento entusiasmado por el próximo capítulo, me siento molesto. No siento ningún interés en el personaje principal, me resulta más irritante que otra cosa. Intento centrarme en la trama, pero no tiene mucho sentido en esos 10 capítulos. Tengo preguntas sobre la historia, pero no siento que sea interesante encontrar las respuestas.

Elvenerable:Lo leei hasta a la actualidad y razón hay demasiado rápido aún que es solo trabajo de traducción, lo que deja ver su buen trabajo de traducir la obra
6mth
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Elvenerable
ElvenerableLv2

If I like the translation work, compared to other translations, there is no (power plant, USA or British automobile), it is quite good in terms of the story if basically it is good compared to books by Garys Stus but it is the only one of campione with decent and active translator

Fernizer:Okay I will write it in English and then put it into google translate for spanish version. I haven't mentioned the translation itself, because it seemed decent if a bit... automatic? I may be oversensitive but it feels like your usuall "throw it into a translation tool and then edit what cames out" nothing amazing but it good enough to read. You say there is a reason that it is too fast? I don't mind fast-paced story, I wouldn't have a problem with that as long as it was written properly. But this is the problem I have with this story - the way it is written. I'm reading it and I don't feel excited for the next chapter, I feel annoyed. I don't feel any interest in the main character he is more irritating to me than anything. I try to focus on the plot, but it doesn't make much sense in those 10 chpaters. I have questions about the story, but I don't feel like it would be interesting to find the answers. versión en español Está bien, lo escribiré en inglés y luego lo pondré en el traductor de Google para la versión en español. No he mencionado la traducción en sí, porque me pareció decente, aunque un poco... ¿automática? Puede que sea demasiado sensible, pero parece el típico "arrojarlo a una herramienta de traducción y luego editar lo que salió", nada del otro mundo, pero es lo suficientemente bueno para leer. ¿Dices que hay una razón por la que es demasiado rápido? No me importa la historia de ritmo rápido, no tendría ningún problema con eso siempre que esté escrita correctamente. Pero este es el problema que tengo con esta historia: la forma en que está escrita. La estoy leyendo y no me siento entusiasmado por el próximo capítulo, me siento molesto. No siento ningún interés en el personaje principal, me resulta más irritante que otra cosa. Intento centrarme en la trama, pero no tiene mucho sentido en esos 10 capítulos. Tengo preguntas sobre la historia, pero no siento que sea interesante encontrar las respuestas.
6mth
Elvenerable
ElvenerableLv2

If I don't explain myself well, it would be among a mountain of manure, it is the one that looks the least like kk but it still is for several reasons.

Elvenerable:If I like the translation work, compared to other translations, there is no (power plant, USA or British automobile), it is quite good in terms of the story if basically it is good compared to books by Garys Stus but it is the only one of campione with decent and active translator
6mth
Golden_Exprience
Golden_ExprienceLv4

Elvenerable:Lo leei hasta a la actualidad y razón hay demasiado rápido aún que es solo trabajo de traducción, lo que deja ver su buen trabajo de traducir la obra
6mth
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Four95
Four95Lv14

Perfect score just because there is so little Campione Fics. that both exist and aren't abandoned.

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Beatriche
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A Campione – a Godslayer – is a supreme ruler. Since he can kill a celestial being, he can therefore call on the sacrosanct, divine powers wielded by the gods. A Campione – a Godslayer – is a lord. Since the power to kill a deity is in his hands, he therefore looms over all mortals on Earth. A Campione – a Godslayer – is a devil. Since of all mortals who live in the world, none can assume a power to match his!

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AerysTargaryen
AerysTargaryenLv4

"Author, were you inspired by a Chinese novel or are you translating?" 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

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OtakuSad0
OtakuSad0Lv3

The story up until chapter 66 was annoying and now the MC is with Campione's MC's sister and for plot reasons he managed to kill the god like in the canon, if it's just to follow the canon's plot I should see the original

6mth
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

Great story but the MCs change in personality hurt the story. he was a pacifist for 20 years then suddenly he's this battle loving super being with bloodlust who suddenly has knowledge about everything and anything. He supposedly purged his bloodlust. maybe there will be an explanation for this later but if his personality is this boring going forward then ill have to pass on reading further. the way he's acting is exactly like 90 percent of other MCs on here, generic feeling. at least when he didn't have powers and was more vulnerable his personality had a life to it, a uniqueness. not sure really how to justify his transformation into who he is in the chapter im currently reading. ill keep reading ahead hoping for a change because I like the author and his other stories, if it improved ill definitely revise this review.

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Tingfei
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_Nia
_NiaLv4

hmm 5 star just cuz its a campione fic but writing can definitely be improved.. Well I'll come back later when stacked enough chapters.. hope you dont drop

7mth
VersusLily
VersusLilyLv14

Reveal spoiler

3mth
Blabla_Gros
Blabla_GrosLv4

good ratings because this is the ultimate rare Campione story that is not just dropped at chapter 10.

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