I was interested at first until I found out it was a small harem he has a harem system why did you give him a small harem so I dropped
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LIKEDepends on if the girls are doing lewd things to each other. But it's irrelevant now cause i read a few chapters and had issues with the fic. My advice would be to proof read(read the chapter before posting it) the chapters before posting so you can catch obvious typos and ensure there are proper quotation marks for speech. Good luck with your fic bro
The_Ninja_king9138:would a 3 sum count in your Discription
thank you and i will
FinnsRevenge:Depends on if the girls are doing lewd things to each other. But it's irrelevant now cause i read a few chapters and had issues with the fic. My advice would be to proof read(read the chapter before posting it) the chapters before posting so you can catch obvious typos and ensure there are proper quotation marks for speech. Good luck with your fic bro