Disappointing novel and just felt like a wish fulfilment fantasy of some country hick who is rather unimpressive with the way he did things. Sure, he gains this swag of money but does nothing about developing himself, decides to be materialistic and buys clothes, watches, cars and a new dwelling. Major purchase so far is a vehicle racetrack. His points have been spent on ju-jitsu skill, endless stamina (so he can impress the girl he met with his performance) and driving mastery. But throughout there is nothing grabbing in this novel. The author decide for a cash grab and locked it at 15 which is way to soon to have anything revealed or teased and most likely as a result, many will just say nah, nothing here, not wasting the coins/fast passes. Basically I was not intrigued to read further, my interest would have risen if the MC considered he isnt a big mogul just a lucky one and he needs to develop to make a mark on the landscape. Perhaps the author planned this but in 14 chapters, there was no interest to explore a “possible” development. Perhaps the author could have at chapter one revealed more of say a future where he is at, and then go back to how it all began. But the horse has bolted. Next please.
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