I’m sorry but the OC is the weakest part for me me in this book like everytime the OC has a paragraph about him or what he’s doing I skim it or skip it. I find the Avengers and Wanda and Vision are more enjoyable to read then the OC. Like I get it the oc is weak and gets stronger later on but the thing is you would think the when the oc was near death he would unleash some magic energy or power to protect himself even if it was a fluke. Hopefully you continue this and find someway to make the oc a bit more appealing anyway this is not for me but I know some people will enjoy your work so keep going.
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