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Hamtaro_
Hamtaro_Lv16mth
2024-08-19 23:19

Good writing quality and stable updates, the biggest problems are the lack of common sense and the weird fetishism which completely ruin the whole thing: The author is pushing for MC (Harry Evans) to get with a woman who abandoned one of her two children and never bothered visiting in almost eleven years for absolutely no reason, the same woman who showed up again and expected everything to go smoothly, the same woman who happens to be his (body's) biological mother. If it's not disgusting to you, then this will be a pleasant story, otherwise...yeah, a pity.

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GodKaiser
GodKaiserLv4

I generally like the author's stories but I have to agree with this review.

Frona_Gorgophone
Frona_GorgophoneAuthor

I have warned you. It's not for everybody.

JRCaste
JRCasteLv4

Are you particularly CLOSE with your Mother?

Frona_Gorgophone:I have warned you. It's not for everybody.
Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

JRCaste:Are you particularly CLOSE with your Mother?
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The_reader_ofnovel
The_reader_ofnovelLv14

Yeah, I was enjoying the story a lot however I lost all interest in this novel at the second chapter I wasn’t expecting a system or a complete change in character personality. it feels like the first chapter was a complete waste of time. What was the purpose of learning the thoughts and feelings of the original harry when it didn’t matter. He dies and gets replaced by someone who doesn’t really care and just follows a lame rizz system like a tool. Should’ve just started with the second chapter with the new guy.

Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

No update?

Frona_Gorgophone:I have warned you. It's not for everybody.
No_1_islookin
No_1_islookinLv4

yes yes this guy gets it. why waste the writer's and our time. If you're going to just kill off people why hear their info?

The_reader_ofnovel:Yeah, I was enjoying the story a lot however I lost all interest in this novel at the second chapter I wasn’t expecting a system or a complete change in character personality. it feels like the first chapter was a complete waste of time. What was the purpose of learning the thoughts and feelings of the original harry when it didn’t matter. He dies and gets replaced by someone who doesn’t really care and just follows a lame rizz system like a tool. Should’ve just started with the second chapter with the new guy.
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