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COLOURFUL_DRAGON
COLOURFUL_DRAGONLv124mth
2024-08-24 21:05

*Gender-bender warning* The MC was a male and was reincarnated a female and will have female love interests though the MC, except for maybe in the future male pervertness, totally behaves and can pass of as a gentle girl, it is more like the MC was actually supposed to be a female and just to appeal more to the male audience the Author has gender bended him/her, the story works just the same if the MC was originally a female. The writing is amazing and hooks you on and the plot so far has been excellent. P.S. This review was written when the story has I think 13 chaps, so take it as you will for future consideration.

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Charadreemurr1
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Can’t wait for the mc to have the bottom in relationship in most of the scene

Agent_BJ
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thank God saved me

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Weaving_That
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Ch 59. I'm not gonna lie, it's really boring. It's a Slice of Life, yes, but it lacks drama, conflict, comedy, love or something that keeps the story interesting. Normally in this type of series the characters and their problems are what make the story go, but here not only are there is no new characters, but also their problems are already resolved or do not exist. The system doesn't contribute anything, in fact you could remove it and make the protagonist a reincarnated genius and the story would be the same because the system has not been the basis for any decision throughout the entire story. I doubt that the points system is well thought out. She earned 180k with 1.8M visits. Now she has 3M and some visits. Where are those points? It seems like the author just wants to give it a point every time she comes up with something new to simplify things, which is pretty meh really. The protagonist mentions that she gets more points from time to time, but it is not even close to what she should have. You'd think the yuri romance would be the most interesting part, but all we've got so far is basically dubiously consensual sexual harassment and no fluff moments that make yuri cute. Finally, there is the plot of writing novels and drawing copied manga that contributes nothing because, to no one's surprise, there is no emotional connection between the protagonist and her work if not only does she not make an effort to do them, but they are not hers either. And if the protagonist is like this: with every achievement we are like that, it's not even absurd enough to be funny like in novels with OP characters, it just is. This is normal in this type of Fanfics, but at least in the others we take the reactions as satisfaction, this progresses so slowly that in 60 chapters we only saw one reaction and not a very good one really.

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