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2024-11-12 18:29

Like this novel, it is well done so far I am about 50 chapters in. One thing I do not understand though is his cultivation not being way faster than it is. Obviously for a 12 year old his cultivation is one of a kind, but considering his insane talent, completely broken system with infinite qi and time freeze I feel like it is impossible for his realm to be that low in 5 years. Just like his 1 break through in 6 months of the secret realm makes absolutely no sense.

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HeavenlydelusionAuthor

thanks for the feedback bro, thing is, that's just for the sake of superficial balance for now, since his stats are too op for his realm, and growing faster pretty much means that there's going to be a lot less for the narrative to cover since he's just going to beat shit up here and there, which is great as well but just pointless if it's all there is to it. anyways, my bad for the rambling and have a great read bro

KevideLv1

if you wanna counterract this problem of having to lowball the mc's actual power in contrast to his actual potential, a good way is to input FOUNDATION. Instead of speeding him trough realms of power, you can just condense his foundation(which will give him the ability to fight across realms), this will give readers the feeling that the mc's potential is not being wasted and at the same time he is not speeding through realms

Heavenlydelusion:thanks for the feedback bro, thing is, that's just for the sake of superficial balance for now, since his stats are too op for his realm, and growing faster pretty much means that there's going to be a lot less for the narrative to cover since he's just going to beat shit up here and there, which is great as well but just pointless if it's all there is to it. anyways, my bad for the rambling and have a great read bro
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