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loidentityLv153mth
2024-11-12 18:29

Like this novel, it is well done so far I am about 50 chapters in. One thing I do not understand though is his cultivation not being way faster than it is. Obviously for a 12 year old his cultivation is one of a kind, but considering his insane talent, completely broken system with infinite qi and time freeze I feel like it is impossible for his realm to be that low in 5 years. Just like his 1 break through in 6 months of the secret realm makes absolutely no sense.

Cheat Cultivator's Ascension

Heavenlydelusion
3.9
427 Chs

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HeavenlydelusionAuthor

thanks for the feedback bro, thing is, that's just for the sake of superficial balance for now, since his stats are too op for his realm, and growing faster pretty much means that there's going to be a lot less for the narrative to cover since he's just going to beat shit up here and there, which is great as well but just pointless if it's all there is to it. anyways, my bad for the rambling and have a great read bro

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KevideLv1

if you wanna counterract this problem of having to lowball the mc's actual power in contrast to his actual potential, a good way is to input FOUNDATION. Instead of speeding him trough realms of power, you can just condense his foundation(which will give him the ability to fight across realms), this will give readers the feeling that the mc's potential is not being wasted and at the same time he is not speeding through realms

Heavenlydelusion:thanks for the feedback bro, thing is, that's just for the sake of superficial balance for now, since his stats are too op for his realm, and growing faster pretty much means that there's going to be a lot less for the narrative to cover since he's just going to beat shit up here and there, which is great as well but just pointless if it's all there is to it. anyways, my bad for the rambling and have a great read bro
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Hello there, looks like you've roamed around long enough for you to stumble here so why not give it a try? This shameless author guarantees a significant pp growth if you read the smut scenes, so avoid reading in public. Do bear in mind though that the first few chapters are set pretty fast pace but this pace, along with the plot will start to pick up as it progresses, I hope the fellows who decided to give it a try have a good time reading it.

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dustin_fitzgeraldLv14

I couldn't Evan give the book a chance you have a 7 year old boy sexually playing with his mother and this is less than 10 chapters in not only is it to far but also to soon to be putting smut iI when we haven't learned shit about the mc and he is only 7 years old it's just weird and makes the story trashy

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DrathysLv15

Does his mom then does his grandma. This is twisted. Read up to chapter 30. Dropping.

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Si_XLv3

Great read so far! There are some rare typos here and there but it's overall clean. The characters feels alive and the pacing is good. Keep writing author

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NYX531Lv13

one of the most annoying thing for me is him being referred to as immortal like young man instead of using his name it just unbearable and the same for other characters it gives the vibe like the author want to show a mystery feeling but fails badly. And it's very cliche sometimes like the first time he world travel and meet the city lord and it's said it's a backward world but has tea coffee pastery etc and asks about if the world is flat and solar system it just doesn't fit right.

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Daniel_MeiraLv2

I usually only comment on bad things when the story is completely unbearable or when it is a waste of potential. This time it falls into the second category. The idea is certainly interesting, but there are many inconsistencies that made it impossible to continue the story without having a stroke. The main one was the lack of research and completely illogical things happening. His mother is literally a disgusting pedophile and everyone is very stupid. Anyway, I recommend reading at least 10 chapters to realize the waste of potential. I recommend the author delete this book and rewrite it, but always with the help of another person to advise him to avoid it becoming so unbearable. Usually when we write, we are unable to see our flaws.

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Muhammed_Farhan_8609Lv3

The story is good and it is also fast paced. Characters's are all good.

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author why is this not appearing on your profile is there something wrong with it or is my app bugging

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