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Imjustadev
ImjustadevLv46mth
2024-08-11 06:35

meh, it was good while it lasted, the writing quality is above average, story development is mid, updating stability is really good, didn't get into much of the world background but there is Gwen, black cat aka Felicia, mj (the red head b#tchy one not zendeya), Cindy moon, miles morales and harry Osborne (the world is a mix au), apparently main heroins are balck cat and mj, which I personally don't like mj, the guy knows all the horrible AND I MEAN HORRIBLE stuff she has done to peter in comics, cartoons, movies, etc ... AND still likes her, so I can only conclude that this Peter Parker is a masochist.

Spider-Man: A New Spiral

FanFictionPremium
4.6
130 Chs

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PizzaStopsTime
PizzaStopsTimeLv4

Amazing Spider-Man MJ was great tho

6mth
Lucifer6
Lucifer6Lv5

There was no mj in amazing spiderman

PizzaStopsTime:Amazing Spider-Man MJ was great tho
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PizzaStopsTime
PizzaStopsTimeLv4

mb I got the title wrong… I believe its the Mj from the animated series from the late 90s

Lucifer6:There was no mj in amazing spiderman
6mth
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Lucifer6
Lucifer6Lv5

Ahh that one sure

PizzaStopsTime:mb I got the title wrong… I believe its the Mj from the animated series from the late 90s
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Lucifer6
Lucifer6Lv5

Are you talking about spectacular That seems to match

PizzaStopsTime:mb I got the title wrong… I believe its the Mj from the animated series from the late 90s
6mth
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Liioo
LiiooLv4

dont like any mj, honestly. the red hair is a bit of a hoe, and zendeya is meh 😐 really don't know why there are so many simps for her she is pretty, but that's it

6mth
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Imjustadev
ImjustadevLv4

Liioo:dont like any mj, honestly. the red hair is a bit of a hoe, and zendeya is meh 😐 really don't know why there are so many simps for her she is pretty, but that's it
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Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv13

mj is alright in the ultimate universe

Liioo:dont like any mj, honestly. the red hair is a bit of a hoe, and zendeya is meh 😐 really don't know why there are so many simps for her she is pretty, but that's it
6mth
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Juhiko
JuhikoLv6

for the moment

Daoist4MxvaV:mj is alright in the ultimate universe
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DemonoidKing
DemonoidKingLv4

bro you really think they gonna make another bad MJ? like not for story purposes but do yk the backlash they would get from readers? i don’t think they’re that dumb lol and everything is going fine so far

Juhiko:for the moment
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DemonoidKing
DemonoidKingLv4

if anything we might have to worry about peter with how many girls he attracts. i swear there’s gonna be. a plot point with him cheating on “accident”

Juhiko:for the moment
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Juhiko
JuhikoLv6

I hope not, but that was the ultimate marvel that universe before it was destroyed was very weird

DemonoidKing:bro you really think they gonna make another bad MJ? like not for story purposes but do yk the backlash they would get from readers? i don’t think they’re that dumb lol and everything is going fine so far
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Javier_Graneros
Javier_GranerosLv1

No solo es masoquista, también tiene una personalidad desagradable, desde un principio se nota que no tiene cualidades heroicas, me pareció extraño que se quejara sobre otros Spiderman, fue hipócrita al querer ser el único Spiderman, considerando que en realidad el no es Peter Parker y los otros serían un mejor Spiderman. Así que por eso lo dejé, si algo he visto en su personaje es que es alguien arrogante, delirante, impulsivo e hipócrita, tal vez el autor luego logré darle un poco de crecimiento y mejore, pero no tengo ganas de esperar algo así en base a suposiciones.

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Imjustadev
ImjustadevLv4

english?

Javier_Graneros:No solo es masoquista, también tiene una personalidad desagradable, desde un principio se nota que no tiene cualidades heroicas, me pareció extraño que se quejara sobre otros Spiderman, fue hipócrita al querer ser el único Spiderman, considerando que en realidad el no es Peter Parker y los otros serían un mejor Spiderman. Así que por eso lo dejé, si algo he visto en su personaje es que es alguien arrogante, delirante, impulsivo e hipócrita, tal vez el autor luego logré darle un poco de crecimiento y mejore, pero no tengo ganas de esperar algo así en base a suposiciones.
2mth
Orion_Nion
Orion_NionLv11

are you crazy, ultimate mj? she uses peter, watches him get harassed by her 'friend'. then peter simp tells her he's spiderman and mj becomes what you expect her to be. Gwen ultimate is better by far.

Daoist4MxvaV:mj is alright in the ultimate universe
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