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2024-10-12 11:01

I wanted to enjoy this story, but the overall experience left me feeling disappointed and frustrated. First off, the pacing is all over the place. The plot moves at a snail’s pace, with long stretches of nothing happening. I found myself skimming through large chunks of irrelevant scenes that do nothing to advance the story or develop the characters. To make matters worse, the author seems to release updates painfully slowly. What’s most irritating, though, is that the author refuses to share the original title of the work . Author is intentionally withholding information, which makes it hard to connect with the story as there are no consistent updates. There’s no transparency, and that lack of trust really diminishes the overall reading experience. I had high hopes going in, but this story has been nothing but a chore to get through. It could be much better with proper pacing, consistent updates, and if the author doesn't want to update just share the original work name and we can read on our own. Until then, it’s just not worth the time.

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