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Will he date penny? Is it a single female lead ?

Will you edit the second volume? or will it remain unedited? I am waiting for the edited version before I complete the story. Great Work on the whole story.

Have you dropped rest of the stories on your page ?

Have you stopped updating all your other works? If no, do you have any planned schedule in mind ?

No sense, No logic. It's all over the place and there is no story/ world building, the rhythm, there is no rhythm, it fells like it was written under the influence. Not recommended.

Honestly, this was a chore to read. The story is all over the place, there’s no clear timeline, we dont know whats happening with the world timeline and different characters, and it doesn't makes sense. The characters feel flat, and the writing is bland. I kept waiting for it to get better, but it never did. It’s hard to stay interested when the plot doesn’t follow any logic. Overall, it just felt messy and boring.

Rage Bait. Feels like it's trying to be funny but it's just classic misery and just stretch it out for giggles. Overall, I didn't feel engaged and invested in the story. Big let down.

Is this story still in the works or did you drop it?

Hey do you have any other recommendations of the same type of works? Thanks

Is it similar to some other novel? Please share that name, I'll check it out as well. It looks good till now..............................