Review Detail of ACHILLES in Gojo Uchiha Twin Brother Of Itachi Uchiha

the main fault I see is that I gave Itachi too much attention, that I can understand and I understand why everything thinks I'm glazing. but I did warn everyone MC for the first 10 chapters was Itachi, I wanted to have a kind of rivalry. I tried to understand what you wrote about Minato, Shisui, and Madara. if you are trying to say that I'm saying there is no other genius out there, then you are wrong. All I'm saying is Itachi has the best feats as a genius to his name, putting him above everyone. Madara is ignored since we don't know much about his childhood, but I'm not saying Madara is less talented, I'm just ignoring it as I'm looking at feats that have been shown. I believe Itachi has the best talent feat shown in the anime, is that a fact? I think so because I can't find others. Is someone like Indra and Hogoromo more talented? Yes, but do we have feats on their talents, no because their stories were not focused on. MC's wishes were simple. Before he got the wishes, he wanted to be Itachi brother with the hope of sucking up a bit of his talent, while at the same time getting the Uchiha bloodline. The first wish, was something like the 6 eyes which would come preinstalled with the Limitless. he said that so the sharingan and 6 eyes could fuse, but the god changed up the first wish a bit. The second wish was to have more control over the infinity he brings into reality, which would open the door to all types of jutsu he could create using the concept of infinity. Again, God changed this wish. The last wish was the power to adapt, but again god nerfed the wish. Things look like they could get past Infinity because MC hasn't even mastered the damn thing. I laid it out from the start MC wasn't as talented as Itachi, and only is his rival thanks to his eyes. That's because although they are twins, it didn't magically make him as talented or more talented as him.

1 i could of swore i seen mc saying has 100% potential and so he could relax and why would he relax and let itachi get stronger knowing he would kill his family if he had to in the future you plan so much but didn't plan about that author? The mc wish also included learning about his eyes or the basics of them so there shouldn't even be much of an problems with learning and he was too lazy to attempt it. 3 The fic is now dead judging by comments from the first few chapters due to your mistake and nobody even want to see itachi as mc due to his messed up head and most talented or equally would be kakashi before obito and rin death and then what about the adapt wish??? There's also the little character interactions between mc you just time skip or don't talk about the academy or his supposidly interaction with kurenai, anko and the 12 others, You just really made this fic bad all your fics are great at the start because of the ideas but then you seem to be doing something nobody went to

read about/ the itachi gloating. Then all the ways people bypassing infinity with an belt or chakra infused punch and it annoyed me and probably 90% of your readers which cause us all or most to read and stop caring about commenting or even reading.

I'l say work on your interactions more and don't go for an multiple mc approach as that never works out and it makes us feel less intreasted in the actual mc if we hearing in the back how this other character is just so much superior like we hear to see the mc who we hope is an genius or isn't second to an character which i feel you messed up about this fic. your othwr fic 6 eyes in cultivation world was so good untill mc love who if i remeber old as hell got killed mc let the killer live and he was all fine letting the other character talk bad about him and her which killed that fic, Ps i noticed that author seemed to not want to kill favorites character or characters he likes which he needs to take away treat the mc as your favorite character or you'll let stuff like that slide because its those characters.