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2024-09-09 03:21

good work ! that would be good to know about the different force, where he lives ( capital or low end city) how useful can items be in the world. the lvl of the highest group. and something i don't understand like can others only take off the fruit from the game ? or make specifications of what else they can take off. it feels blurry to me. Also will he be a lone player or get into a guild etc. Anyway good read wish to see more

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He lives in a mid tier city but low end neighborhood. Maybe I haven't depicted that well. I'll make sure to do so in the coming chapters. We're going to be getting more screentime for the highest leveled groups soon. The fruit of corruption is one of the very few items that can be taken out of the game by any player. As for other items, they have to be a specific requirement for them to be retrieved to reality. August power makes him capable of extracting anything regardless of whether they meet the requirement or not. I will point out what the requirement is specifically in the chapters. He is only a lone player for now. In the next few chapters he is going to make acquaintances with some players.

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Author I don't know why but all of your most recent chapters have a lot of sentences that are jumbled up words can you plz fix that

Decrepit_bastard:He lives in a mid tier city but low end neighborhood. Maybe I haven't depicted that well. I'll make sure to do so in the coming chapters. We're going to be getting more screentime for the highest leveled groups soon. The fruit of corruption is one of the very few items that can be taken out of the game by any player. As for other items, they have to be a specific requirement for them to be retrieved to reality. August power makes him capable of extracting anything regardless of whether they meet the requirement or not. I will point out what the requirement is specifically in the chapters. He is only a lone player for now. In the next few chapters he is going to make acquaintances with some players.
Decrepit_bastard
Decrepit_bastardAuthor

Oh I didn't notice that. I will check them and make corrections. Thank you 🙏

DarkMoonRaven:Author I don't know why but all of your most recent chapters have a lot of sentences that are jumbled up words can you plz fix that
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