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the mc is just a tool for his sister xDD

good work ! that would be good to know about the different force, where he lives ( capital or low end city) how useful can items be in the world. the lvl of the highest group. and something i don't understand like can others only take off the fruit from the game ? or make specifications of what else they can take off. it feels blurry to me. Also will he be a lone player or get into a guild etc. Anyway good read wish to see more

nice start

are yousure it s translated ? xD can t find it

i hate people ranting on and on undecided trash mc so fuking annoying ! XD and this guy landon so fuking annoying do people really talk like that xD fuck me at 4 am reading just fuck my mind. 20 at least so he could his basic abilities and result 0 extravagance no cheat at all. so sad i put 5 stars because writing it might be hard using your imaginations with one guy lazy and another guys annoying well everyone got their own imaginations. i pity you i don't know what life you ve lived. might have been hard.

i wish you could write another story it s really good, so tired of trash novels please make one more xD

invincible since everything he mutated is unparalleled so invincible (unique) weak to strong since he just started and even then he got a (invincible ) unique skill meteor that no one can have and makes him invincible among other newbies, so kind of invincible at this level from weak to strong

mehhh wtf is this make it simple and explain the basics, what scrren what mouse ? are we dogs ? bro the guy talks for two hours after his first battle, a little bit irrationnal. when evolve it goes from 1 to 3 ?? fuck best math in the world, and a system like chinese novel that is hiding and open new functions when author wants, i guess i right? i mean is there a story ? fuck it 's so hard to find a story that is not trash here, can t you fucking understand that no one wants to read no story only upgrade this and that ? at least make it fun or funny, so serious when it's like this. bro fuck i m done. give you 4 star to affect ur rating but really disappointed i would put minus 10 if i could.

how did you you transform 200 chap into 350 chap a genius ahah

i laughed the entire time, more funny than anything else it changes from usual novel 'meat stick' ahaha xD