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Infinitum_Kairos
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2024-08-22 16:39

It was a bit fast-paced with the plotline as it started. The story's flow is good and smooth; as per each of the characters' introduction and design, they are realistic and quite relatable with their emotions depicted in the background. I only started by reading three chapters, but I could see that there's more that could progress with its dynamics.

Serendipity in the Second Act

ManangBertha
4.1
54 Chs

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ManangBertha
ManangBerthaAuthor

Thank you so much for the review! Truly appreciate it

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ManangBertha
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Hello, people of the world! As shameless as I might have to ask for your review on the book, here I am giving a self review on my book. I just want to say thank you for everyone who had been reading the book despite the slight changes and editing that has been happening from time to time. [*A little side note on the history of this book: I have already written and published this as a short story for a previous competition. And I had deleted it to turn it to a new book (novel) with more chapters than the original plot, giving it a new title and publishing it under a new author name.*] All in all, I will try my very best to finish it until the end and give it a good ending, unlike my other books where I literally screw things up last minute. So, thank you for the support and I hope you will enjoy the book as much as I do.

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Lyes_Belmeguenai
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awsome continue i like it so much can't help

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Here’s five star …. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Here’s five star!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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this is an interesting book continue to wright

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Nice work keep going you have our full support

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the story is good and the character is amazing

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great story, enjoyable and I like the characters

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sennun
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Defenseless graped victim Mc turned lover of the aggressive taking no as a yes answer and forcing himself on the helpless bottom Mc and oh a dark tall mysterious ceo ML. How original.

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im not good with review but overall the story flow quite good for me and i really like the character.Good job 👍

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