Infinitum_Kairos
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Just an oddball in the universe :)
2023-01-26 JoinedGlobal
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Infinitum_Kairos4dReplied to Veiled_WatcherTrue
He told himself nothing could bring him down; he didn't want much, just to live well.- Infinitum_Kairos5dCommented
pet* name ( if pet’s name, you’re making it sound like the male hero is a pet.)
Based on Ophelia's memory, she made the pet's name herself for the hero. - Infinitum_Kairos5dCommented
same pet* name > nickname
Ophelia used to call the hero by that name. Is it only a coincidence that the wife and the heroine called the hero by the same pet's name? - Infinitum_Kairos5dCommented
by his pet* name
Layla was aware that Claudia called the hero by his pet's name that she made herself, but somehow Layla thinks that it was familiar in a way as if that word already came out of her mouth multiple times and not read it. - Infinitum_Kairos5dCommented
jewellry adorned* her neck (mixed tenses)
When she finally regained her whole consciousness, she was already sparkling clean and dressed in a gorgeous gown. Her hair was styled perfectly, her makeup was flawless, and jewellery adorns her neck and ears. - Infinitum_Kairos6dCommented
his parents’ wishes
David sighed softly, realizing that resistance was futile. He nodded and adjusted the car's course, steering toward the undisclosed location that held the promise of a reunion long overdue. In that moment, the enigmatic Wilson Yates seemed willing to defy even his parent's wishes for the sake of this event. - Infinitum_Kairos8dCommented
These taste* good
"Loreen, you're finally here. These tastes good," Sera handed me a glass convincing me it will be our last bottle of liquor before we will sleep. - Infinitum_Kairos8dCommented
second glance*
Sera was already enjoying her second glanced. Her eyes glinted at the sight of Loreen arriving with Mr. Unknown. It was as if she was saying, 'I knew it!' - Infinitum_Kairos8dCommented
Katarina*
"Leander does not want to be the next head, Nathan. You of all should know that. What you said now can be interpreted as you insinuating that Leander arranged for that woman to hurt his brother. You do not want to make him mad," Katerina whispered and gently rubbed his head. - Infinitum_Kairos8dCommented
Katarina*
"Power?" Katerina placed her hand softly on his cheek. "I often wonder if he wants to be here at all…" - Infinitum_Kairos8dCommented
Katarina*
"And do you know him well?" Katerina asked and Nathaniel shook his head. - Infinitum_Kairos10dCommented
Missing (") at the end of this dialogue.
"Oh yeah…" Daran muttered, feeling highly embarrassed. "He let go of the board and levitated himself and the board back to the ground. - Infinitum_Kairos10dCommented
twin sibling*
This paragraph has been deleted. - Infinitum_Kairos11dCommented"Thank you for picking up my trash."
- Infinitum_Kairos11dCommented"Don't yell at Alexandra, she's still my little sister after all."
- Infinitum_Kairos11dReplied to Shusendo
Same here! 😏
The music was lyric-free, a pure classical mixture of guzheng and pipa. - Infinitum_Kairos11dCommented
yes, turned vampires if the transition is successful.
Moreover, mortals who get involved with vampires either become vampires themselves or are burned as vampires. - Infinitum_Kairos11dCommented
tips* of her hair
Just like him, Fil was only in a robe. The tip of her hair was still slightly damp. - Infinitum_Kairos11dCommented
maybe high* collared dresses?
Her dresses were all like this. A long dress with a long collar that reaches the bottom of her neck, its sleeves reached her elbow. Although her wavy hair hazel was now a letdown, it was originally tied in a clean, low bun. Unlike her best friend, Marianne, who followed the fashion trend, Fil often received strange looks with the way she dressed. - Infinitum_Kairos11dCommented
Vincent and Marianne's* betrayal (one name should only be in the possessive form if pertaining to the same thing that they own or did: betrayal)
After finding out the wicked truth about her fiance and best friend, Fil found herself in the church. She confessed the building malice within her, in hopes it would help her ease the pain in her heart. Sadly, even if the pastor made a clear point, the pain and feelings of unrest caused by Vincent's and Marianne's betrayal had crystallized into something more concrete.