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YourDad_
YourDad_Lv59mth
2024-08-12 05:32

Here's a new review after reading it. Anyway you're great author. No seriously I don't had much expectations for it, I was just happy that a Versatile Mage fanfic is on the platform. Moving on: • Writing Quality - There are some very minute errors here and there but otherwise it's good. (4.3⭐) • Story Development - Seems good to me, for now (authors usually messes up their story in the middle part,so yeah). Though there are some thing that could have been handled differently but that's just my opinion so nvm - 4.0 ⭐ • Character Development - I don't wanna say it but the book was lacking a bit in this part. Though you mad the MC Cautious, hardworking and ambitious there are not many character interactions of the MC that we have seen which can flesh out the characters more so you can definitely work on it (3.5⭐). • Updates - It's going good for now. Ideally i hopes that one chapter/day schedule would be followed consistently. (4.8⭐) •World Background - The author know his sh it so it's going good and there aren't any consistencies so (4.8⭐) That's all I guess and keep writing. We will always support you and I sincerely thanks you for your effort to contribute to Versatile Mage community by creating such a good fanfiction.

Overpowered Mage: A Versatile Mage Fanfic

Damon_Starfall
4.8
50 Chs

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Damon_Starfall
Damon_StarfallAuthor

Thank you for your review. I would surely work upon the things I lack.. it's my first time writing so yeah I may have done bad but I would try to improve and make sure to provide the things you have outlined. As you may know this is the start of the novel and in this part till the practical exam I can't make any significant action scene. the character interaction is lacking I agree but with his personality and past I would say this one I did cautiously and from practical examination which is from next chapters I would give proper exposure to the chats

9mth
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YourDad_
YourDad_Lv5

You have done splendidly for a new Author. I just wanna see how it all goes🙃

Damon_Starfall:Thank you for your review. I would surely work upon the things I lack.. it's my first time writing so yeah I may have done bad but I would try to improve and make sure to provide the things you have outlined. As you may know this is the start of the novel and in this part till the practical exam I can't make any significant action scene. the character interaction is lacking I agree but with his personality and past I would say this one I did cautiously and from practical examination which is from next chapters I would give proper exposure to the chats
9mth
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ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

so why isn't mu ningxue in harem is it because of the protag of the novel?

Damon_Starfall:Thank you for your review. I would surely work upon the things I lack.. it's my first time writing so yeah I may have done bad but I would try to improve and make sure to provide the things you have outlined. As you may know this is the start of the novel and in this part till the practical exam I can't make any significant action scene. the character interaction is lacking I agree but with his personality and past I would say this one I did cautiously and from practical examination which is from next chapters I would give proper exposure to the chats
8mth
3
YourDad_
YourDad_Lv5

Update: It may very well be dropped in the future. So read at your own discretion.

8mth
1
Blake_Astrid_
Blake_Astrid_Lv4

seriously it was a disappointment as he is to cowardly and runs away at sight of danger and not human but like a robot of probability running away at slighest threat and with this type of cowardly charecter sooner or later no women will stay with him for long

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Arcane_mystic4RT5
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versatile mage world has one of the best magic power systems look forward to this novel. keep up the good work and please update regularly.

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streiz
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This is probably my third time reading a Versatile Mage fanfic, and I have to say I'm enjoying every bit of it. I stumbled upon it by accident, but now I eagerly await each new chapter. What stands out to me aside from the story itself is the consistency of updates. Just a request for the author, make Asharuiya the female lead or one of the female leads if you end up going to make it harem. I honestly don't mind reading a harem that is actually well made which is quite rare to find. Love your story, don't drop it!

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Pilotfranco
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So there are some issues with character development early on however I love the fic, the world building is good, updates quick af 6 chapters in a day is wild. The grammer is good not perfect but good. I love quanzhi fashi (versatile mage) both the novel and manhua are amazing so whenever I see a fic I love them. Please continue with the fic and don’t drop it.

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AzureKingdom
AzureKingdomLv4

I just want to give this five star for giving me the fanfic i been waiting for. I will wait for it to reach chapter 40 to try. I hope it's not so disappointing to read. I'll change this review depending on the quality of this fanfic. hope for more versatile mage fanfic!!!

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Dark_knight07
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It's a good novel I hope you update regularly

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Vaneford
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I haven't finished VM and mostly forgotten the small details so thank you for the chapter explaining to us[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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Chibaku_Monster
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I've been reading this fanfic thus far, and it deserves the utmost praise from me, I'm sure others who have read it would agree with my statement.

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GABRIEL_Ferr
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Quase Muito bom 👍 .

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Apollocus
ApollocusLv13

I really like this so far never have read a Versatile Mage Fan-fic and idk if I will ever find one of similar quality to this one here. The Versatile Mage system was always super fun looking and interesting, looking forward your take on the Versatile Mage universe!

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