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2024-08-04 19:35

Let me know what you think about the quality of the book and I will release chapters more quickly. Thank you, wonderful readers[img=strong][img=strong]

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Blue_Pizza
Blue_PizzaLv5

The paragraphs could be longer, but mc's humour is top tier 🤣

APOCALYPTIC_NOVELS
APOCALYPTIC_NOVELSLv4

is there any romance 🤔

DaoistnNdKoa
DaoistnNdKoaLv1

I wonder if this series is a fanfic of Kumo Desu Ga Nani Ka?

Firelight_9364
Firelight_9364Lv13

is this a tl

Colinh45
Colinh45Lv14

Do you have a Patreon

TempestDragneel
TempestDragneelLv13

great novel

InnocentOnes
InnocentOnesLv1

"So I'm a Spider, so what?" ran so "So I'm a Snake, Who Cares?" can also run but at a potentially moderately faster pace

PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

Are you going to give MC a human form?

Enmesarra_1
Enmesarra_1Lv2

hay author! something that i forgot to mention on my review is The lack of description of the characters, their eye color, hair color, height, body type, fatness or thinness, these things, I hope that you will delve deeper into describing your characters in the future because it improves the quality of the book in general ، For example: his blue eyes sparkled with determination or her long ebony hair swept away by the wind like a river of blackness flowing through the air, these lines not only describe a characteristic of the characters’ outward appearance but also describe an event, this helps the reader to visualize Scenes in the book in general, and especially help with fight scenes, and be sure to describe the background in the scene and its effect on the characters and their actions, and always remember that you are writing a book and not a movie script, so you must help the reader to visualize as he will not be able to watch the scenes, Because it's a book, in The Matrix, I know the background of the fight and what the characters look like because I see them, but in a book the author has to help me "see" these scenes with words. all on all , i love your book , keep up the good work

DaoistnNdKoa
DaoistnNdKoaLv1

Is mc a boy or a girl?

_N_ight_
_N_ight_Lv4

Lovee the snake, and its style in humour

Deunnero
DeunneroLv15

good book so far... however the book is undergoing an audit which is why I cannot unlock new chapters

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