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LIKEhay author! something that i forgot to mention on my review is The lack of description of the characters, their eye color, hair color, height, body type, fatness or thinness, these things, I hope that you will delve deeper into describing your characters in the future because it improves the quality of the book in general ، For example: his blue eyes sparkled with determination or her long ebony hair swept away by the wind like a river of blackness flowing through the air, these lines not only describe a characteristic of the characters’ outward appearance but also describe an event, this helps the reader to visualize Scenes in the book in general, and especially help with fight scenes, and be sure to describe the background in the scene and its effect on the characters and their actions, and always remember that you are writing a book and not a movie script, so you must help the reader to visualize as he will not be able to watch the scenes, Because it's a book, in The Matrix, I know the background of the fight and what the characters look like because I see them, but in a book the author has to help me "see" these scenes with words. all on all , i love your book , keep up the good work