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2024-12-30 11:51

it was an amazing read but then the author let us down, started updating unfixed chapters, we were patient, we waited for over a month and tried to encourage her as much as possible to keep going but it's over now I'm done I'm really sad I loved this story so much, Bale&Aiden's scene were so beautiful, took my breath away.. and now I'm heartbroken because I have to part with it I hope you don't abandon it forever and that you come back and keep writing If you do fix all the chapter and resume updating finished ones please post a response to one of my comments and let me know and I'll be back in a heartbeat, and I'll change my rating then and support the hell out of you

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