Great story. Beautiful world building with an interesting take on the Greece Mythology. Great storytelling. Though the mc was kind of pathetic in the start, he has grown and is getting better. My only advice to the author will be that get your power level system in place. Like two even low level of gods fighting should cause a very good level of destruction whereas your two very high gods fighting at most did some fissures on the ground and blast some card. Now that you are moving towards making your mc stronger, I hope his fights would have some level of destruction rather than some low level of fissures because he is a literal god and one of the main three of Olympus at that.That's all I had to say and otherwise the story is all good. If you are reading this review, then I would say that give some time to the story, it gets better. Good luck author👍🏻

The author said the mc is an 80 year old scholar, but instead what we got is a 7 year old Dawn Syndrome patient with ADHD and some of the most cringe Greek settings I've ever seen in a story, the funniest thing is that bro expects you to waste money or chapter passes on this garbage when every chapter barely progresses anything.

This shit makes me want to read with my eyes closed.

Biggest problem is just how cringy and badly written the MC is. He’s supposed to be an 80 year old scholar yet acts like a stupid kid, is dumb as hell, and then goes back and then we get the emotions bullshit where he gets mad and doesn’t even know why he’s mad, then he says he’s not afraid of Zeus while he stands there petrified waiting for his death. The last straw was the fact that he somehow beat Zeus because his Bident protected him and essentially beat Zues by itself despite the fact that Zeus’s Bolt is supposed to be more powerful, and even if it isn’t it shouldn’t in any way be able to beat Zues. The plot armor is overwhelmingly bad

Great work from the author and thanks for working on this theme, keep it moving

it's among the worst chapters I have ever read .. if I have to read 10 more chapter then I would literally turn into zombie ... whole story is baseless with no foundation at all. everything is happening randomly.

As a long-time fan of Greek mythology, I was immediately intrigued by the premise of this novel. I'm curious to see how the author portrays the Greek pantheon and whether they stay true to the traditional myths or put their own spin on the characters and their dynamics. I enjoy stories that blend different genres, as it often leads to unexpected and compelling narrative twists. I'm hopeful the author can balance these elements seamlessly and create a richly immersive world for the reader to get lost in

I would just like to start off with saying that this novel idea was fantastic and I even quite enjoyed the first 20 chapters. This is despite the consistent spelling mistakes and missing words and just weird sentence structure. ( That persist to chapter 160 +. I checked.) Your story takes a swan dive into ironically enough straight into hell starting from the first paid chapter. Just everything changes. Hades becomes Bipolar which I can live with but then he some how develops a system which you explain pretty okay... ish... But every event you write after that is like you watched too many James Bond movies or just spy movies in general. Hades literally just goes apeshit at random. But then out of nowhere he's just an absolute pushover at the birthday party. Where all he needs to do is either not take out the apple or literally be like "Jk zeus here is your present you are the fairest of them all haha". Even then when he tries to shape the ordeal its like he just froze and melted down like a panic attack. Also, the texting scenes are really rough to read through. Speaking of you made this guy redonkulous level stupid. I have too many reasons to list out but I mean it tracks I guess because he is a mortal in A gods body but every other time you write him he's not an idiot so it really just leaves me feeling off. Sadly im not going to continue with this story which is terrible because again IT REALLY IS a great idea and you had me for the first 20 chapters it doesnt really feel like you reread any of your work and or sat down and planned any of it out.

I'm not going to waste my time on a book that will probably be really good but only has 20 unlocked chapters.

First Greek Novel I've Read and so far this is a amazing story, Keep it up Author[img=update][img=recommend]