I will be honest in my critique. I know it is not the fault of the translating author, but I have to give a truthful evaluation. First of all, the fanfic is good. I like the premise of mentioning real people in their stories, it feels immersive. However, this story has glaring errors, mainly in trying to portray the main character in a favorable light all the time, even creating moments just to make the protagonist look ‘cool.’ This, to me, ruins the fanfic. Additionally, the protagonist’s dialogues with women are extremely forced. The girls meet the protagonist just once and say, ‘Wow, you are handsome.’ Seriously? That doesn’t exist. What girl would say that in the first conversation with a guy? Another forced scene is when the author created a situation where the guy was street racing with the Fast and Furious actors. They meet for the first time and then are committing crimes together? And just because the actors play racing roles in movies doesn’t mean they are racers themselves, but actors. The author completely lost track between reality and fiction. Some may say that it’s just a fanfic and shouldn’t be taken so seriously, but I sincerely prefer something realistic. If the world is based on one like ours, make it believable. Another thing I have to complain about are some rather nonsensical words throughout the fanfic. It seemed like the author was emphasizing all the time that a certain character is black and has dark skin, and at some points trying to favor China. This made me uncomfortable as I read.

Across America, Starting with the Boxing Champion——>mtl 纵横美利坚，从拳王开始——>Raw

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I won't say much. I have read the raw and trust me it was my worst decision, the story gets progressively worse, with major glaring flaws, you will find it once you reach 250 or something chapters, there is so much good talks about china and other Eastern countries that at one point you might forget whether he is from Hollywood or eastern entertainment circle. the mc becomes more and more hypocritical and the author gets his character quite low just for some cool looking scenes.

This is damn good,I finished reading it up in a few hours and can't wait for future chapters. thank you author for giving us a good read

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This is a pretty fantasy approach to boxing where mc is continuously riling everyone up but gets never defeated .I can understand his ambitions honestly, but the way it was approached, it just feels absurd . It every chapter, there's lots of unreadable words . I hope you'll fix them.

Good story 👏 story development is amazing I got hooked to it and finished 108 chapters in 2 day writing quality can improve overall Good work 👍

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