A not so bad fanfic. I would say its strong side lies on the comedic side, especially the first chapters. Though for me, it's too messy and illogical. --- Spoilers and complaints --- - Most things aren't really well thought out. (Feel messy) * The kidnapping attempt. (Part-timers would be more professional than devils that were sent as assassins) * Introduction of Yuno as a character. * The feeling characters give off. (Great Red being wary of a teleportation circle) * The God reincarnating the protagonist. (Being a pushover is his only personality trait)
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