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2024-08-01 06:17

The real problem is that the author didn't want to write anything new. This is just Naruto with a weak OC in it. Nothing changes, and something convenient always happens, so the story of Naruto never changes. Kaguya, who is born with a sage body, constantly has low amounts of chakra. Let that sink in. Not to mention, even when she gets the Tensigan, she still can't beat a normal Kage-level ninja...

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Dao_Of_Heaven
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It's normal for the protagonist to have lower combat power in the early stages of the story. Do you expect a 12-year-old with the chakra of a genin or chunin and the Tenseigan to defeat a Kage-level ninja? The effectiveness of the Tenseigan depends on the user's chakra capacity. As for the Sage Body, when did I write that? Regarding the story not changing, that is not entirely true. While the general trend may remain the same, small changes do exist. There is no nerf, and currently, in the latest chapter update, 16-year-old Kaguya is capable of fighting against Madara Uchiha during the Fourth Great Ninja War arc. You may think Kaguya is a 100% copy of the original Kaguya, but that's not true. She's just a fragment of the original Kaguya, so naturally, many things will be lacking. Plus, the system is doing work behind the scenes. Anyway, it's all the system's fault, lol. Perhaps what you're really concerned about is that the protagonist has just left the novice village only to encounter demon king bosses everywhere, which is why you think she's always suppressed and nerfed. I understand that it feels torturous and annoying, but it's a necessary transition for the story. This issue only exists in the early stages of the story. Thanks for your review, anyway.

dragon_god_5667
dragon_god_5667Lv1

so does this story will have hetero stuff? or is just yuri?

Dao_Of_Heaven:It's normal for the protagonist to have lower combat power in the early stages of the story. Do you expect a 12-year-old with the chakra of a genin or chunin and the Tenseigan to defeat a Kage-level ninja? The effectiveness of the Tenseigan depends on the user's chakra capacity. As for the Sage Body, when did I write that? Regarding the story not changing, that is not entirely true. While the general trend may remain the same, small changes do exist. There is no nerf, and currently, in the latest chapter update, 16-year-old Kaguya is capable of fighting against Madara Uchiha during the Fourth Great Ninja War arc. You may think Kaguya is a 100% copy of the original Kaguya, but that's not true. She's just a fragment of the original Kaguya, so naturally, many things will be lacking. Plus, the system is doing work behind the scenes. Anyway, it's all the system's fault, lol. Perhaps what you're really concerned about is that the protagonist has just left the novice village only to encounter demon king bosses everywhere, which is why you think she's always suppressed and nerfed. I understand that it feels torturous and annoying, but it's a necessary transition for the story. This issue only exists in the early stages of the story. Thanks for your review, anyway.
rami_5393
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and is kaguya in your top5 pretty naruto girls?

Dao_Of_Heaven:It's normal for the protagonist to have lower combat power in the early stages of the story. Do you expect a 12-year-old with the chakra of a genin or chunin and the Tenseigan to defeat a Kage-level ninja? The effectiveness of the Tenseigan depends on the user's chakra capacity. As for the Sage Body, when did I write that? Regarding the story not changing, that is not entirely true. While the general trend may remain the same, small changes do exist. There is no nerf, and currently, in the latest chapter update, 16-year-old Kaguya is capable of fighting against Madara Uchiha during the Fourth Great Ninja War arc. You may think Kaguya is a 100% copy of the original Kaguya, but that's not true. She's just a fragment of the original Kaguya, so naturally, many things will be lacking. Plus, the system is doing work behind the scenes. Anyway, it's all the system's fault, lol. Perhaps what you're really concerned about is that the protagonist has just left the novice village only to encounter demon king bosses everywhere, which is why you think she's always suppressed and nerfed. I understand that it feels torturous and annoying, but it's a necessary transition for the story. This issue only exists in the early stages of the story. Thanks for your review, anyway.
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