good story till now just don't stop the story midway

I had already thought before about what would happen if a Siphon became an Original, in The Vampire Diaries the Siphon/Vampire Hybrids theoretically have an infinite battery of magic which is their Vampirism, so theoretically they can do any magic without many problems Now what would happen if the Magic of Vampirism was Esther's Modified Immortality Spell as a battery, what would that do to a Siphon?

It's...not my cup of tea. But I like the idea behind it though. So forgive me, author, but I plan on stealing the idea from you! <insert Evil Laugh>

it's a hot mess, but a lot of things are on here.

The story till now is interesting and well developed though interactions with characters could be done better but still 5 chap in so still too early to talk about it, in anycase this story can be either good as fk or be a flop depending on how it develops should still definitely give it a try. Also will say directly anyone that doesn't like ìncést can just get the héll out of here.

Too slow. They are not even vampires yet.

This is really good here's to hoping there will be 100+ chapters of this masterpiece [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=update]

Some good stuff, do u have a p@treon with advaced chapters? need to fill in the character sdukajfukahsdfukadsfuihaskudhAUOSHdiyasiaoshdioadoi

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good story till now I just hope yy don't drop midway 🥰