Gave the Writing quality a 2 because it was still coherent and understandable in the beginning, story development there's really nothing much to say here apart from the fact that again in tgw beginning it was alright with the world building and his skills but it all went down the drain, the worst part of all these is that the mc gets NTrd almost all his girls sleep with one man or the other, at some point the author just changed MC name to Rae. All in all it was pretty good at the start but everything starts going downhill at the story progresses a shame. NTR novel but the MC gets NTRD a waste of time.
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well, in my defence, the maids do not count. As for the others. There are some instances but not real NTR'd. Though, I appreciate your opinion thanks.
You say the maids doesn't count but Maya is litrerally the only female in the character list of your book, but anyways it doesn't matter anymore, it's your book at the end of the day you write as you please, just understand that books with other males getting involved with women MC has a relationship with won't really go far on this platform i hope you take this to heart and don't make such a mistake next time. Have a nice day.
precious_soul:well, in my defence, the maids do not count. As for the others. There are some instances but not real NTR'd. Though, I appreciate your opinion thanks.
I appreciate that, I thought of discarding the maids after some plot development but now that you say it like that, I think you are kind of correct. I will make it okay in the upcoming chapters. Thanks again
Thanks for the warning mate.
Nimimad:You say the maids doesn't count but Maya is litrerally the only female in the character list of your book, but anyways it doesn't matter anymore, it's your book at the end of the day you write as you please, just understand that books with other males getting involved with women MC has a relationship with won't really go far on this platform i hope you take this to heart and don't make such a mistake next time. Have a nice day.
Yeah, he is correct. NTR is already a niche subject, what you are doing will make a lot of people who even like Netori avoid the book (At least for me). If you really want to earn on this platform, I'd advise you to rewrite the chapters that look like MC getting Ntred. But it's just damage control. Honestly, it's your choice, who am I to advise you. Good luck on your writing journey.
precious_soul:I appreciate that, I thought of discarding the maids after some plot development but now that you say it like that, I think you are kind of correct. I will make it okay in the upcoming chapters. Thanks again
Thanks for saving me time....mc isnt supposed to get NTRED he is supposed to ntr others smh
only good opinion you have ever had but it'd probably AI generated
ImJustOneGuy:Yeah, he is correct. NTR is already a niche subject, what you are doing will make a lot of people who even like Netori avoid the book (At least for me). If you really want to earn on this platform, I'd advise you to rewrite the chapters that look like MC getting Ntred. But it's just damage control. Honestly, it's your choice, who am I to advise you. Good luck on your writing journey.
Thank you very much for informing me, I hate/abhor NTR and Yuri with all my strength. DROPPED
