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Nimimad
NimimadLv104mth
2024-11-06 06:02

Gave the Writing quality a 2 because it was still coherent and understandable in the beginning, story development there's really nothing much to say here apart from the fact that again in tgw beginning it was alright with the world building and his skills but it all went down the drain, the worst part of all these is that the mc gets NTrd almost all his girls sleep with one man or the other, at some point the author just changed MC name to Rae. All in all it was pretty good at the start but everything starts going downhill at the story progresses a shame. NTR novel but the MC gets NTRD a waste of time.

NTR: I became a noble?

precious_soul
4.3
193 Chs

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precious_soul
precious_soulAuthor

well, in my defence, the maids do not count. As for the others. There are some instances but not real NTR'd. Though, I appreciate your opinion thanks.

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Nimimad
NimimadLv10

You say the maids doesn't count but Maya is litrerally the only female in the character list of your book, but anyways it doesn't matter anymore, it's your book at the end of the day you write as you please, just understand that books with other males getting involved with women MC has a relationship with won't really go far on this platform i hope you take this to heart and don't make such a mistake next time. Have a nice day.

precious_soul:well, in my defence, the maids do not count. As for the others. There are some instances but not real NTR'd. Though, I appreciate your opinion thanks.
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precious_soul
precious_soulAuthor

I appreciate that, I thought of discarding the maids after some plot development but now that you say it like that, I think you are kind of correct. I will make it okay in the upcoming chapters. Thanks again

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ImJustOneGuy
ImJustOneGuyLv15

Thanks for the warning mate.

Nimimad:You say the maids doesn't count but Maya is litrerally the only female in the character list of your book, but anyways it doesn't matter anymore, it's your book at the end of the day you write as you please, just understand that books with other males getting involved with women MC has a relationship with won't really go far on this platform i hope you take this to heart and don't make such a mistake next time. Have a nice day.
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ImJustOneGuy
ImJustOneGuyLv15

Yeah, he is correct. NTR is already a niche subject, what you are doing will make a lot of people who even like Netori avoid the book (At least for me). If you really want to earn on this platform, I'd advise you to rewrite the chapters that look like MC getting Ntred. But it's just damage control. Honestly, it's your choice, who am I to advise you. Good luck on your writing journey.

precious_soul:I appreciate that, I thought of discarding the maids after some plot development but now that you say it like that, I think you are kind of correct. I will make it okay in the upcoming chapters. Thanks again
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MangaisLife1
MangaisLife1Lv2

Thanks for saving me time....mc isnt supposed to get NTRED he is supposed to ntr others smh

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EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

only good opinion you have ever had but it'd probably AI generated

ImJustOneGuy:Yeah, he is correct. NTR is already a niche subject, what you are doing will make a lot of people who even like Netori avoid the book (At least for me). If you really want to earn on this platform, I'd advise you to rewrite the chapters that look like MC getting Ntred. But it's just damage control. Honestly, it's your choice, who am I to advise you. Good luck on your writing journey.
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Melshan
MelshanLv7

Thank you very much for informing me, I hate/abhor NTR and Yuri with all my strength. DROPPED

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p3d0_Man
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precious_soul
precious_soulAuthor

Author here, I am trying to develop the characters and write a world where the MC would get woman but not everyone of them, trying to keep it real. I appreciate suggestion, Criticism, as well as your opinion.

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Man... how could you? you make a kinky and beautiful emotional naration of smut story and just giving me that much and then just return to normal chapter right after that. give me back my horniness! >:c

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Starts off good, writing was good, but goes downhill later. MC is supposed to be Netori, but he gets cucked, almost every woman he has interest/relationship with end up getting involved with other men. such a disappointing turn of events. And his ability is removed later, yet another let down.

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Haha, this is good! The smut scenes are very to my liking, and there's a lot of them too! The story idea is also very interesting. Looking forward for more. But author, you need a synopsis!

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I like how the story progresses, keep writing Author this is a masterpiece, and highly recommended can't wait to read the next update 🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

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I’m really enjoying this book. Even though it has some clichés, the writing is strong and engaging overall. I’m definitely a fan of this genre, and I appreciate how it captures the essence of the themes I love.

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bro what happen why aren't you posting?? it's been almost a month ?

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change your cover, only sexyy women ..........

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