I think the book is pretty good and it’s interesting but I am curious is there going to be dual cultivation techniques and if so, is the MC and the heroines both going to learn the techniques

Author is mc is naive, idiot, beta pathetic, good guy, righteous, self righteous?

I am here to write a review after 100 chapters are complete and I have gotten many comments about how excessive the background information is, but I don't think possible for me to change that as It is been in locked chapters which I can't change even if I wanted to. HOWEVER, I WILL SAY ONE THING THAT YOU CAN SKIP FROM 48 TO 59 IF YOU DON'T WANT TO SEE THE PAST OF AVA AND ISLA THERE IS ALSO SOME INFORMATION ON THESE THAT WOULD BE IMPORTANT BUT YOU CAN STILL SKIP AS I WOULD ADD THOSE LITTLE BY LITTLE IN UPCOMING WHICH ARE IMPORTANT TO FOR BETTER UNDERSTANDING OF THE NOVEL.

This story really has great potential… but a ton of filler chapters and meh grammar. The filler chapters focus on too many side characters imo. Like before the MC woke up. I actually like a few chapters introducing aunt may and the sister, but it drags too long and includes too much stuff outside of whats going on. Also, too many chapters spent on MC and his sisters flirting. He was only 11. Feels weird. Should have done it closer to 15. Plus… you straight up skipped chapters on him and aunt may early on. This writing really needs polishing to make it a great story. More meaningful dialogue, and more structure. Sometimes it feels all over the place. Focus more on whats important. Thats my review from chapter 46.

Shameless Author POV: "The feeling of giving your novel 5 stars is pretty good" Author "Aren't you little to arrogant for a newbie author" Some random kid "Well, If I didn't not appreciated my own work then who will" Author "Of course, I will specially the scene where Goddess **** *****..." Some random kid "Well, Aren't you a man of culture my guy" Author "You have good eyes, Author" Some random kid "Well, how old are you to be this good" Author "I am definitely 18+" Some random kid "Really" Author "Well, I am just few weeks" Some random kid "How many weeks" Author "Only 157 week " Some random kid "..." Author "Well I am going, My mother is calling me for doing school homework " Some random kid

It feels like the author is procrastinating getting to the actual world evolution because he doesn't actually know how he's going to write that aspect of the story. To me it feels like this entire 100 and some odd chapters are just one extremely unnecessarily long prologue that should have ended at least 30-40 chapters ago. Otherwise it's a pretty good story.

the story of particular has a good deal of potential but it's being held back with all the excessive background information of characters who haven't played any major role in the story as of yet. it would be better to avoid all the sexual insinuations tells time for the situation to happen the plot is solid and I believe it could be a really good story I've got to back off all of the info drops until it's necessary for them to happen.

This is really a great job, author! There is only one problem, and that is his excessive softness with his sister. Judging by their interactions and his constant concessions, the harem will not begin until chapter 1000, if it begins at all. I would like to hope that the dynamics in the relationship between mc and his sister will change soon, and the harem part will begin. Sorry if I offended you, just a little dissatisfaction.

haiya uncle Roger here your uncle would you support by writing a review haiya make the word evolve faster haiya and don't make aunty May too strong uncle Roger scared of her haiya and upload some more nephew

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