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2024-10-18 10:53

This is really a great job, author! There is only one problem, and that is his excessive softness with his sister. Judging by their interactions and his constant concessions, the harem will not begin until chapter 1000, if it begins at all. I would like to hope that the dynamics in the relationship between mc and his sister will change soon, and the harem part will begin. Sorry if I offended you, just a little dissatisfaction.

World Evolution! Awakening Limit Grade Talent!

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236 Chs

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you are right it will change however you don't have to worry about it until 1000 it will happen much sooner than you think. And thank you for sharing your honest thoughts.

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haiya uncle Roger here your uncle would you support by writing a review haiya make the word evolve faster haiya and don't make aunty May too strong uncle Roger scared of her haiya and upload some more nephew

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