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SilverTaurus88Lv43mth
2024-10-28 21:22

The story actually pretty good. The first half of the the story 5/5. The later part unfortunately is not as good as it started. The main issue the Author started to use too many POV, you are no longer feel who is the MC, because of this the story not as smooth as it was. Now it's too fragmented. I usually don't mind if we sometimes see the story from different perspective, but here this is no longer the case. Actually this is not a huge problem we are still early in the story and the Author can fix this. So i advice for everyone to give it a try, maybe when you are starting the Author already fix this POV issue.

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