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Rakot
RakotLv14mth
2024-08-28 09:54

A dumb repetition of the original story. The author has a hard time with imagination. The main character here is just as an outsider who participates in the plot, without really changing anything. The beginning was good, but in the end it was a big disappointment.

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Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

Plus the first season ended with the reveal that people in TOG can break the divination ability LOTM sequence gives the MC. I thought the author was developing people could pray to the MC when saying his LOTM magic works with TOG's magic system. But nope. That was for the nerf nothing cool.

Kaiser_6117
Kaiser_6117Lv14

At least defend yourself author, was very excited to see another tog fic but if what this guy’s saying is true then its just gonna be a waste of reading time

Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

Bro what💀 I don't know if this is just personally me since I haven't read or seen ToG but nothing is actually repetitive (where did you get that from?), along with that, out of the many authors I've seen, this one actually has a lot of imagination (look at the other fanfic they made, that's just an example). And the thing is, you're probably calling the author repetitive and imagination less simply because of the fact that the main character doesn't have these weird and amazing abilities yet that can be used in every single shape or form possible, that's Nen. along with that, even if a character doesn't necessarily change the plot that doesn't mean said character and the novel itself is bad, that is literally just your personal opinion and I don't know why so many people agree with this. not every character has to automatically be the main center of the plot if it's a fan fiction— The entire point is that you're building upon another story with your own unique ideas (sometimes even multiple). basically half of what you said is subjective and the other half is just wrong.

Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

his ability was never nerfed, the author clearly had to stating multiple times in the story that SHINSU IS LIMITLESS, The explanation that he has given is that Headon with the overpowered system that exist in TOG interfered with his Spirit vision. it was never nerfed it's just that an ability countered his

Daoist_Dan:Plus the first season ended with the reveal that people in TOG can break the divination ability LOTM sequence gives the MC. I thought the author was developing people could pray to the MC when saying his LOTM magic works with TOG's magic system. But nope. That was for the nerf nothing cool.
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Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

not every argument has to start a 15 page argument just cuz someone doesn't like their work

Kaiser_6117:At least defend yourself author, was very excited to see another tog fic but if what this guy’s saying is true then its just gonna be a waste of reading time
Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

You've just described how the nerf works, not why it isn't one.

Nullity_Marrionete:his ability was never nerfed, the author clearly had to stating multiple times in the story that SHINSU IS LIMITLESS, The explanation that he has given is that Headon with the overpowered system that exist in TOG interfered with his Spirit vision. it was never nerfed it's just that an ability countered his
Kaiser_6117
Kaiser_6117Lv14

“Not every” yes i agree but this particular situation needs it, the shit reviews are stopping people from reading the book and portraying it as trash. Myself included have not read the books because of the low reviews, because why would i waste my time determining if something is worth reading or not when someone already did? The author’s defense wouldve put some light on why the reviewer said what he said and some reasons why it is what it is, i was particularly excited when reading the title and the synopsis so i was kinda bummed at the reviews being shit as it is.

Nullity_Marrionete:not every argument has to start a 15 page argument just cuz someone doesn't like their work
Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

hold on a second... so you're just going to plan on ignore the multiple 5 and 4 Star reviews that exist and only listen to the 2-star and below ones? I get it, and these types of situations, the author should most definitely fight back (in your own words) however, it's extremely stupid to only pay attention to the low rated reviews when there are so many high rate ones.

Kaiser_6117:“Not every” yes i agree but this particular situation needs it, the shit reviews are stopping people from reading the book and portraying it as trash. Myself included have not read the books because of the low reviews, because why would i waste my time determining if something is worth reading or not when someone already did? The author’s defense wouldve put some light on why the reviewer said what he said and some reasons why it is what it is, i was particularly excited when reading the title and the synopsis so i was kinda bummed at the reviews being shit as it is.
Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

Nerf — when a ability or item of some kind has its overall effectiveness and use limited you genuinely do not know what the term means, cuz I literally just explained why it was not a Nerf. A Nerf is one something is limited, not allowing for it to do all the things it potentially could have. this is not a nerf. if an ability counters yours, that is not in fact a Nerf, it is just an ability that counters yours. along with that, he's only a sequence seven (mind you that is in volume 2, and in volume one he was only a sequence eight which is even lower), so only now had he just reached the mid-sequences so I don't find it that hard to believe that there is an ability in the verse that would be able to counter his Spirit vision at least somewhat. and plus he still figures out that Rachel is acting

Daoist_Dan:You've just described how the nerf works, not why it isn't one.
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Kaiser_6117
Kaiser_6117Lv14

Yes that is how stupidly easy i am to influence, once i see the bad reviews its like the good ones are just made by bots in my eyes, tho to be fair at the time that i made my first comment i saw two low reviews consecutively stating lots of things that i dislike on a novel.

Nullity_Marrionete:hold on a second... so you're just going to plan on ignore the multiple 5 and 4 Star reviews that exist and only listen to the 2-star and below ones? I get it, and these types of situations, the author should most definitely fight back (in your own words) however, it's extremely stupid to only pay attention to the low rated reviews when there are so many high rate ones.
Kaiser_6117
Kaiser_6117Lv14

Also, now that i’ve gon back and look at the reviews most of them are high which is good as ive really wanted to read some tog fics but it really just goes to show how bad reviews affect my interest in reading stuff huh, I really need to change that aspect of mine i guess. Nevertheless thanks for replying on a comment made so long ago and making me have interest in reading this book again :}

Nullity_Marrionete:hold on a second... so you're just going to plan on ignore the multiple 5 and 4 Star reviews that exist and only listen to the 2-star and below ones? I get it, and these types of situations, the author should most definitely fight back (in your own words) however, it's extremely stupid to only pay attention to the low rated reviews when there are so many high rate ones.
Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

Yea, ik. A lot of these reviews are probably just bots or alternate accounts created by people who just don't like the story for no reason. anyways, have a great day

Kaiser_6117:Also, now that i’ve gon back and look at the reviews most of them are high which is good as ive really wanted to read some tog fics but it really just goes to show how bad reviews affect my interest in reading stuff huh, I really need to change that aspect of mine i guess. Nevertheless thanks for replying on a comment made so long ago and making me have interest in reading this book again :}
Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

Overall effectiveness, limited, all the things it could potentially have done. These apply to divination abilities not working. It's almost as if LOTM magic working on Shinsu which is 'cOMpletLY LiMItlEss' gave it a huge weakness someone is now using. But in your head that isn't a nerf. No couldn't be. You found the definition and still couldn't connect the dots. Idiot.

Nullity_Marrionete:Nerf — when a ability or item of some kind has its overall effectiveness and use limited you genuinely do not know what the term means, cuz I literally just explained why it was not a Nerf. A Nerf is one something is limited, not allowing for it to do all the things it potentially could have. this is not a nerf. if an ability counters yours, that is not in fact a Nerf, it is just an ability that counters yours. along with that, he's only a sequence seven (mind you that is in volume 2, and in volume one he was only a sequence eight which is even lower), so only now had he just reached the mid-sequences so I don't find it that hard to believe that there is an ability in the verse that would be able to counter his Spirit vision at least somewhat. and plus he still figures out that Rachel is acting
Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

okay since your feeble brain simply cannot understand the rocket science that I seemingly am saying for your own negligible level of comprehension, I will give you an example : let's say I have the ability to teleport, and someone else has the ability to stop teleportation. that is not a Nerf. that is simply just someone who counters your ability, it's as simple as that. a Nerf is when the ability itself gets limited, which is not what's happening here since another ability was countering it. and since you probably will continue to say that I'm wrong, I will give you another example : let's say I have a divination ability, and someone else just so happens to have the power to block divination, once again, that is not a Nerf but simply just that someone has the ability to block my power.

Daoist_Dan: Overall effectiveness, limited, all the things it could potentially have done. These apply to divination abilities not working. It's almost as if LOTM magic working on Shinsu which is 'cOMpletLY LiMItlEss' gave it a huge weakness someone is now using. But in your head that isn't a nerf. No couldn't be. You found the definition and still couldn't connect the dots. Idiot.
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Absurd_Idiot
Absurd_IdiotLv1

LOTM Power System is kinda weak at the start if it is not a combat oriented pathway, but the moment it reached mid-high sequence, it is OP AF.

Scorpion_13
Scorpion_13Lv4

Just adding something, even in Lotm Divination could fail and suffer from interference.

Nullity_Marrionete:okay since your feeble brain simply cannot understand the rocket science that I seemingly am saying for your own negligible level of comprehension, I will give you an example : let's say I have the ability to teleport, and someone else has the ability to stop teleportation. that is not a Nerf. that is simply just someone who counters your ability, it's as simple as that. a Nerf is when the ability itself gets limited, which is not what's happening here since another ability was countering it. and since you probably will continue to say that I'm wrong, I will give you another example : let's say I have a divination ability, and someone else just so happens to have the power to block divination, once again, that is not a Nerf but simply just that someone has the ability to block my power.
Rakot
RakotLv1

(English is not a native language) No, the fact is that from a certain point on, while reading this fanfiction, it was as if I simply began to reread a stripped-down version of the original Tower of God. The same events, the same phrases, the same results, and the protagonist became an ordinary statistician. The author began to simply stupidly copy the original, without really adding anything from himself, except for rare inserts of the protagonist's thoughts and actions. This is often done by novice authors, or those who are not familiar with the plot. The author himself explains this by saying that not everyone is familiar with the canon, so he decided to do so. And just the same, everything is fine for such people. Such people do not get the impression that they are stupidly re-reading the Tower to God, and even the worst version of it. But for me and others like me, reading was VERY boring and uninteresting, starting somewhere with the exam, and maybe even earlier.

Nullity_Marrionete:Bro what💀 I don't know if this is just personally me since I haven't read or seen ToG but nothing is actually repetitive (where did you get that from?), along with that, out of the many authors I've seen, this one actually has a lot of imagination (look at the other fanfic they made, that's just an example). And the thing is, you're probably calling the author repetitive and imagination less simply because of the fact that the main character doesn't have these weird and amazing abilities yet that can be used in every single shape or form possible, that's Nen. along with that, even if a character doesn't necessarily change the plot that doesn't mean said character and the novel itself is bad, that is literally just your personal opinion and I don't know why so many people agree with this. not every character has to automatically be the main center of the plot if it's a fan fiction— The entire point is that you're building upon another story with your own unique ideas (sometimes even multiple). basically half of what you said is subjective and the other half is just wrong.
Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

isn't the entire point of a fan fiction to be a story built upon an already existing one? you'd have to be quite stupid to not expect at least some events to be the same as the original, since what I literally said a couple of seconds ago is the defining meaning of a fan fiction, building a story upon an already existing one. I don't blame you for not liking that some of the effects are the same in the story, but most of what you said straight up isn't true (at least from my perspective, we are two different people and you have different opinions from mine). this is especially prevalent in volume 2, other I'm just going to assume that you haven't read to that part (which is very much likely true), so yeah.

Rakot:(English is not a native language) No, the fact is that from a certain point on, while reading this fanfiction, it was as if I simply began to reread a stripped-down version of the original Tower of God. The same events, the same phrases, the same results, and the protagonist became an ordinary statistician. The author began to simply stupidly copy the original, without really adding anything from himself, except for rare inserts of the protagonist's thoughts and actions. This is often done by novice authors, or those who are not familiar with the plot. The author himself explains this by saying that not everyone is familiar with the canon, so he decided to do so. And just the same, everything is fine for such people. Such people do not get the impression that they are stupidly re-reading the Tower to God, and even the worst version of it. But for me and others like me, reading was VERY boring and uninteresting, starting somewhere with the exam, and maybe even earlier.
BIG_DREAMER
BIG_DREAMERLv1

Isn’t that what nerfing is

Nullity_Marrionete:his ability was never nerfed, the author clearly had to stating multiple times in the story that SHINSU IS LIMITLESS, The explanation that he has given is that Headon with the overpowered system that exist in TOG interfered with his Spirit vision. it was never nerfed it's just that an ability countered his
Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

there's a massive difference between an ability being nerfed and another ability countering a power.

BIG_DREAMER:Isn’t that what nerfing is
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