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Trojan_HeartVirusLv21mth
2024-12-31 21:47

I couldn't get past the first chapter, it gave me a headache. The narrative is very poor and illogical, as if the author were patching up the same piece over and over again in a frustrated attempt to camouflage a huge hole with poorly made seams. Not to mention that the dialogues are pure garbage juice. I think that if a story starts out full of inconsistencies like this, the best thing to do is not to create expectations that it will improve over time, we all know that it won't.

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