Review based on 74 chapters Writing Quality: I didn't expect a fanfic to have such writing quality. It's on par with experienced authors on webnovel. Updating Stability: Can't say more than it's updated regularly. Story Development: One of the downsides of this fanfic. It's story about a MC who just wants to grow stronger using his Template System. He is no hero or anti villain. He is 'THE VILLAIN'. His only drive is getting stronger. Character Design: Mostly tries to be similar to Gojo Satoru, but is a complete villain. His personality is twisted. He is totally mentally unstable. World Background: These universe traveling fanfics have immense potential, so I rated it high. Otherwise it's about 4 Stars.

The only problems are the mc and the boring story, remove the anti hero tag and use the villain one, the mc is a psychopath who doesn't care about the lives of the people nearby, just like every other Chinese. The story is just repetitive. He levels an ability up, get attacked by someone, he kills them , and repeat. The translator did a good job tho, no errors on the grammar. So yeah, give it a read if you like edgy and overly arrogant MC's.

interesting choice of original power (that didn't came from template) and plot advance, the way you portray marvel and it's character are also on point for me....the only thing that is disturbing is your mc in himself. you made him a villain just for the sake of it. or maybe this is how any of us would act given the same power? he goes around killing innocents like he is playing GTA...heck even while playing that game i've hardly killed as much as he does on single chapter. using blue, red and purple to destroy hundred of meters of buildings containing innocent familles just to show his power and feeds his ego? killing whole group of ingorants just because they found his actions dangerous for their families and life. and mc had no goal..just randomly killing people.people like villain character when they had a solide reason, charisma, and harm those who are mostly scums. but the ones who just kills others for fun? i don't think many readers like this type or it just me who is weird here

Boring . Kill kill kill no wisdom no story nothing really just system overpowered megalomaniac killing machine that serves no purpose . This stories should really be banned . The good thing is that the translation is good but please stop wasting your time on this kind of stories . System stories are already overused and became boring. Anyway thanks for translation

is it a novel that makes you want for more chapters every time the author is great with his background descriptions this book will achieve all expectations and Beyond in all this is a great novel to read😉👍.

An Interesting Idea, a pretty great translation without any annoying AI Influence, it’s a translated novel so the plot has some issues that could be better, and the characters are pretty inconsistent. As of Ch21, The protagonist thinks he has no morals despite only acting heroically for the most part, he throws away a free magneto level loyal subordinate, but I can’t blame him that much since for some reason the lady that wanted to join him attacked him immediately, small things like that come up often, lots of coincidences leading to the right times for the protagonist to ‘come across’ story situations. If your able to not care about these small things, it’s a pretty good read.

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the protagonist just goes on killing everyone that icks him, that is highly edgy and emo character and offers little to no character building 🥲

(PT-BR) Pena que gastei minha pedra de poder em uma história anterior, mas continuo gostando muito da história e espero que o autor continue a escrever e postar a história.