The first two chapters were terrible, I couldn't discern who the protagonist was, I didn't completely understand his combat style the first time. however, it has a lot of potential and at least improved understanding a little in the third chapter.

just like other Chinese novels at the beginning it gives hope that it will be a good story, but like other Chinese authors after 2 chapters it will become a template story .

The MC joined the Straw Hats and promptly started fighting many of the battles Luffy fought in canon. It feels incredibly weird that a member of the crew keeps fighting stronger opponents than the captain. I'm also confused about the MC's Devil Fruit, the Paper Paper fruit, which for some reason the Author made into a Paramecia, even though there is already a Logia Paper Paper Fruit from an old One Piece game...

The translations is alright The story is nonsense most Chinese ff authors want things to happen in their story and are too lazy to set it up this is one of those story that just do things with no logic.

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Im enjoying everything about the story especially the MC’s Devil fruit this is one of the few times I find a storie that give their MC a unique ability keep up with the great work

is this a translation?................................................................ ................. .........

The novel is excellent and the translation is great

overall it's good ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................