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bro the story is going pretty good but add a bit of human touch to the story don't make the mc like he mr perfect and all add some flaws in him this is just my suggestion
finally someone using mochi mochi no mi and pls don't destroy this book by making all girls fall in love with mc and making a harem and don't drop it
is it harem hope its not
another great wholesome chapter by the author, thanks for the chapter
actually i really liked this storyand the family bonding you showed specially the grandfather and grandson bond you showed but adding howard and leonard and their friendship with the mc is not going that great according to me i hope you would improve it in the future chapters and everything else is great in the story