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PsyLoRD
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2024-07-21 14:33

this novel commits the same mistake as all the other Overlord novels do too much Yggdrasil and too little Overlord, and no one cares about the 'game world' part.

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Fisch_in_1_Bowl
Fisch_in_1_BowlLv14

maybe but it does count as a backstory aswell as getting to know the mc and seing them develop when they get in the actual world.

PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

You can do that in many different ways, there are reasons why the original one already started with the game ending, for a good FF about Overlord you should always stick with that, I've never ever seen a good novel about Yggdrasil, why? causa no one cares.

Fisch_in_1_Bowl:maybe but it does count as a backstory aswell as getting to know the mc and seing them develop when they get in the actual world.
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

The author should follow the original, introducing them as they appear (the new things/people/etc) also using flashbacks and extras (like auxiliary chapters/images)

Fisch_in_1_Bowl:maybe but it does count as a backstory aswell as getting to know the mc and seing them develop when they get in the actual world.
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Romance?

BOB_THE_BREAKER:
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BOB_THE_BREAKER
BOB_THE_BREAKERAuthor

Multiple NPC from LOL, GI and like.

Romance_guy:Romance?
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

So it’s harem?

BOB_THE_BREAKER:Multiple NPC from LOL, GI and like.
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

technically ppl do care when ever the author is asked about doing the game part , the majority always shuts towards the wanting to read the game part . In fact i have even seen the author write a compelling story about the game part of overlord it's so good atimes it can pass as it's own anime

PsyLoRD:You can do that in many different ways, there are reasons why the original one already started with the game ending, for a good FF about Overlord you should always stick with that, I've never ever seen a good novel about Yggdrasil, why? causa no one cares.
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

the minority does

Daoist4MxvaV:technically ppl do care when ever the author is asked about doing the game part , the majority always shuts towards the wanting to read the game part . In fact i have even seen the author write a compelling story about the game part of overlord it's so good atimes it can pass as it's own anime
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

and how do u know u aren't part of the minority

PsyLoRD:the minority does
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

just read the comments

Daoist4MxvaV:and how do u know u aren't part of the minority
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

????? i went through comments of every overlord fanfic i read and known of them ever minded the game part of overlord

PsyLoRD:just read the comments
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

i can say the exact opposite

Daoist4MxvaV:????? i went through comments of every overlord fanfic i read and known of them ever minded the game part of overlord
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

You can also see that by my review being the most liked, if people didn't agree, why would they like?

Daoist4MxvaV:????? i went through comments of every overlord fanfic i read and known of them ever minded the game part of overlord
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

your post was liked by only 7 ppl in 3 months

PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

but it is still top 1

Daoist4MxvaV:your post was liked by only 7 ppl in 3 months
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