It is a great Chinese translation, but the change of the Chinese MC name became strange the rest is OK......................................

first of all this is just as far as i know just Chinese translation with slightly change, the first time I read this i though 'is this GPT FF?' the word just idk just fell awkward like genuinely, the writing is confusing, i just barely read to ch 3 and drop it

Reveal spoiler

I just finished reading your latest chapter, and I am absolutely captivated by your storytelling! The world you've created is so vivid and immersive, and your characters are incredibly well-developed. Each plot twist keeps me on the edge of my seat, eagerly awaiting what happens next. Your hard work and dedication are evident in every word. Please keep writing and sharing your incredible talent with us. You're doing an amazing job, and I can't wait to see where the story goes from here!

Low iq novel [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=Why][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap]..............................................

I find this story very interesting, but very repetitive in its vocabulary, it seems like it was written using artificial intelligence and did not go through any review process, in addition it lacks charisma and human touch in the writing.

I have mixed feelings about your work. On the one hand, it is interesting to read even with the Chinese style of storytelling. On the other hand, there is a feeling that the chronology of events is confused, the islands are out of place, it is not clear what is happening with the statistics, the hero is unreasonably strong in some moments, the statistics become either big or small at some moments. (it turns out that the heroes say that they have become much stronger, but in fact they are either weaker or the same as they were), Shiki is in prison, then free, then back in prison, Aokiji, Kuzan and Akainu became admirals, then became admirals again, after which they became admirals again...

I don't know if this an mtl, but overall it's a good start. I'ma wait till 30 or more chapters then continue but, them 8 chp are great 👍👍. Wish ya luck on ya writing and blessings for your health.😊😊❤️

most crew member has D. i dont like it 🤡

Bro... Use the hashtag overpower. The MC hasn't even left East Blue and is already one of the strongest. Furthermore, everyone in the group is a D. In short, it's pretty boring.