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Universe_SupremeLv129mth
2024-07-20 01:54

Not really my style chapters are to short and although I like overpowered or fast pace this is moving to fast. Members of the D clan are said to be stubborn and yet he convinced 2 of them to come under him. He has been sailing for a few weeks and already has all 3 colors of Haki and swordsmanship at A level which is as strong as a Vice-Admiral. I think others should try it and see if they like it, but for me its to unrealistic, short, and constant mention of hard times and there determination seeing them through. (personally don't think they can experience hard times when you keep feeding him pills to strengthen his body and Haki with no effort)

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