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Defitleya
DefitleyaLv128mth
2024-09-18 19:56

It's good. There're some problems in it, like the lack of world building in most of the free chapters (I've read till 33), in those chapters we don't really know how Jin looks like, just that he's poorer than I am in WebNovel. If the Author does some worldbuilding later on, I have no idea because I'll never read since I lack the coins. The story development, I see no problem, there ain't no cliché, well, I never saw one. Overall, 3.8/5. Now, my personal opinion, I hope the Author does not stray from his path and may finish this novel. It's a good novel for people who are just starting to read them. - Defitleya

My Hitman System

John_Titor234432
4.3
144 Chs

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John_Titor234432
John_Titor234432Author

I started writing this novel fully knowing that it's not going to be perfect. Perfection at times attracts inaction and that is totally against my motive for starting this novel. My goal you ask? It's to finish this novel. A simple goal for some but also a very difficult one for some others. Coming back to my novel, I've kept the story simple so that anyone could follow. At times in my life, I've relied on a few online novels to accompany me in times of struggle. They weren't impressive, they weren't great but for some reason they relieved the stress that I had accumulated throughout the day as I worked hard towards my goals. I've tried to replicate that with my bare passable abilities. My story isn't perfect, it has a lots of faults but I will keep on writing and will finish it. Just like how I hope that you, my dear reader, will keep on chasing after your goals no matter how imperfect you are at present. Good luck to the both of us!

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DaoistKQVXSL
DaoistKQVXSLLv12

came into this expecting it to be trash but from the very first moment it grabbed my attention and I'm glad i read this or else i would've missed out on a gem continue uploading author

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DeanDKing
DeanDKingLv4

If you wanna read an Urban Non-Magical Shit.With Realistic action with Slice of Life then this is Pick. Believe Me I read Chapter 112 with Fast Pass.You get addicted to it.

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Ikka_Sne
Ikka_SneLv14

I suck at making reviews😔.. but i am still going to do one for this story.. we are still at the early stage in the story, or atleast i think we are🤔(99 chapters).. when i think about how to discribe this story, my mind goes to like 10 things, and then it does, no not that one pick the other one.. and then it goes blank..I will say this much.. look at the title.. its title says alot! if you dont know if you should give this a try or not, then i would say go for it.. if you are one like me that usely dont like romance in storys like this, then i would still say give it try.. the author have done the romance part well, and not to much of it..so you dont go🤮.. happy reading every one

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Evesty
EvestyLv4

well to start, this is a story that handles balance very well in terms of action romance it has no plot holes as far as am concerned, the story présentes it self quit nicely and no major reliance on the system so that's nice. all in all if u want a chill read that has action and slice of life this is it

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ReaderMan
ReaderManLv14

Great novel, Unique and well done premise. Good and well done characters with a world that so far makes sense. Reminds me somewhat of the Hitman games. Definitely recommend!

8mth
Ballerina_72
Ballerina_72Lv14

Really enjoying this, so far. Can't wait to see how ml develops and deals with his missions. More chapters please 😁

8mth
Demon_Gouhl
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ORIGINofALL
ORIGINofALLLv4

At first i think it would be a story about a edgy adult who is a hitman and a sad edgy mc story and all the mc will do is brood, but consider me surprise when mc actually do have character development and i must say you truly did it beautifully and in ch-122 , mc truly could see consequences after the anil accident(feel bad for nandana) but still this is a 5star book for me

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