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John_Titor234432
John_Titor234432Author3mth
2024-09-12 18:23

I started writing this novel fully knowing that it's not going to be perfect. Perfection at times attracts inaction and that is totally against my motive for starting this novel. My goal you ask? It's to finish this novel. A simple goal for some but also a very difficult one for some others. Coming back to my novel, I've kept the story simple so that anyone could follow. At times in my life, I've relied on a few online novels to accompany me in times of struggle. They weren't impressive, they weren't great but for some reason they relieved the stress that I had accumulated throughout the day as I worked hard towards my goals. I've tried to replicate that with my bare passable abilities. My story isn't perfect, it has a lots of faults but I will keep on writing and will finish it. Just like how I hope that you, my dear reader, will keep on chasing after your goals no matter how imperfect you are at present. Good luck to the both of us!

My Hitman System

John_Titor234432
4.4
117 Chs

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MR_X7
MR_X7Lv13

have faith in your work ^^

3mth
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John_Titor234432
John_Titor234432Author

MR_X7:have faith in your work ^^
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3mth
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Vaudas
VaudasLv12

So far I've liked it, too bad that I'm too poor to buy locked chaps 👍

3mth
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501
501Lv13

I really like this novel keep writing I will buy chapters

2mth
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LittleMiss22
LittleMiss22Lv2

me too

Vaudas:So far I've liked it, too bad that I'm too poor to buy locked chaps 👍
2mth
Daoist01xgy1
Daoist01xgy1Lv12

Is there or will be romance? like will he eventually get a wife or lover ?

1mth
John_Titor234432
John_Titor234432Author

yes

Daoist01xgy1:Is there or will be romance? like will he eventually get a wife or lover ?
1mth
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Ikka_Sne
Ikka_SneLv14

have high Hopes for this! as long as there are no romance with the MC then i am game

1mth
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John_Titor234432
John_Titor234432Author

There is romance. Though in late chaps but it still is there. Just felt informing you now would be better than you finding out after unlocking quite some chaps.

Ikka_Sne:have high Hopes for this! as long as there are no romance with the MC then i am game
1mth
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Ikka_Sne
Ikka_SneLv14

ty so much for the info And 🤬🤬🤬🤬.. that just crushed another Hope for a good story.. but still ty❤️👍

John_Titor234432:There is romance. Though in late chaps but it still is there. Just felt informing you now would be better than you finding out after unlocking quite some chaps.
1mth
Krassus_2
Krassus_2Lv4

is it gonna be harem? 7 female side characters and not a single male side character does not bode well..

John_Titor234432:There is romance. Though in late chaps but it still is there. Just felt informing you now would be better than you finding out after unlocking quite some chaps.
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John_Titor234432
John_Titor234432Author

I'm still debating that in my mind to be honest. I'll be able to properly answer that after a month.

Krassus_2:is it gonna be harem? 7 female side characters and not a single male side character does not bode well..
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Deen_Mohammed_9938
Deen_Mohammed_9938Lv4

You are being a Humble man. you didn't add those cringy shit like in Cultivation Novel. Nor did you write it like the 7 Grade Dialogue I read in My English Textbook for the exam.

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John_Titor234432
John_Titor234432Author

Deen_Mohammed_9938:You are being a Humble man. you didn't add those cringy shit like in Cultivation Novel. Nor did you write it like the 7 Grade Dialogue I read in My English Textbook for the exam.
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Other Reviews
DaoistKQVXSL
DaoistKQVXSLLv12

came into this expecting it to be trash but from the very first moment it grabbed my attention and I'm glad i read this or else i would've missed out on a gem continue uploading author

5mth

Deen_Mohammed_9938
Deen_Mohammed_9938Lv4

If you wanna read an Urban Non-Magical Shit.With Realistic action with Slice of Life then this is Pick. Believe Me I read Chapter 112 with Fast Pass.You get addicted to it.

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Ikka_Sne
Ikka_SneLv14

I suck at making reviews😔.. but i am still going to do one for this story.. we are still at the early stage in the story, or atleast i think we are🤔(99 chapters).. when i think about how to discribe this story, my mind goes to like 10 things, and then it does, no not that one pick the other one.. and then it goes blank..I will say this much.. look at the title.. its title says alot! if you dont know if you should give this a try or not, then i would say go for it.. if you are one like me that usely dont like romance in storys like this, then i would still say give it try.. the author have done the romance part well, and not to much of it..so you dont go🤮.. happy reading every one

1mth
Deus_magnus
Deus_magnusLv4

maybe It's just not there yet, but the system seems more like a serial killer system than a hitman. I mean isn't the system supposed to give points for successful assassinations on a designed target, not a random cop and definitely not 'matured' street bullies. but so far, the story is great, just hoping that he will develop from a street psycho killer into a 'big name' underworld hitman.

3mth
ReaderMan
ReaderManLv14

Great novel, Unique and well done premise. Good and well done characters with a world that so far makes sense. Reminds me somewhat of the Hitman games. Definitely recommend!

3mth
Defitleya
DefitleyaLv12

It's good. There're some problems in it, like the lack of world building in most of the free chapters (I've read till 33), in those chapters we don't really know how Jin looks like, just that he's poorer than I am in WebNovel. If the Author does some worldbuilding later on, I have no idea because I'll never read since I lack the coins. The story development, I see no problem, there ain't no cliché, well, I never saw one. Overall, 3.8/5. Now, my personal opinion, I hope the Author does not stray from his path and may finish this novel. It's a good novel for people who are just starting to read them. - Defitleya

3mth
Ballerina_72
Ballerina_72Lv13

Really enjoying this, so far. Can't wait to see how ml develops and deals with his missions. More chapters please 😁

4mth
Demon_Gouhl
Demon_GouhlLv1

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Shrabon4757
Shrabon4757Lv2

Honestly, it is one of the best webnovel I have ever read. While I may not be very good at reviewing, but I hope this review of mine attracts more audience to this gem. ••REVIEW•• WRITING QUALITY: This is one of the most well written webnovel on this site. No unnecessary info dump, long paragraphs etc. It helps you imagine the whole scenes in jiffy. There is no situation where you have to think to understand a scene. So for me it's ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. UPDATING STABILITY: There is nothing much say than that the author is consistent with his schedule. Especially when his work is of such high quality. So again ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ from me. STORY DEVELOPMENT: Hands down one of the best stories out there. It doesn't feel like those clichéd stories, instead it genuinely feels good. It has simple yet effective story development. So again ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ from me. CHARACTER DESIGN: This story has the best character designs I have seen so far. Every single one of them feels humane. They feel more like characters from movies, not webnovels. It has the best romance too in my opinion. SO ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ again. WORLD BACKGROUND: Pretty much the same as ours, but there is more to it than what we are seeing. There is some supernatural stories at play behind the scenes. Again ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐.

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