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Killer_Bee_44321
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2024-07-17 13:07

Has potential to be a good story. Hope to see more!

Rise of the wind hero Fūjin

Ryuko_453
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25 Chs

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TonyStank
TonyStankLv4

general rule writing in english is only one character can speak per paragraph, if new character speaking start new paragraph, please use for "speaking" & 'thinking'

9mth

Vedora_Tempest
Vedora_TempestLv13

The story is quite good and I like it from what I Read till chapter 5, the pacing is done quite well. but you should consider running all the chapters in chat gpt with this prompt: "Add appropriate commas, full stops and correct the grammar mistakes. Revised content only." I know, it's a lot of work. But it's better than this garbled text without any commas and full stops along with grammar mistakes. Please consider doing this. The story is good and I like it, that's why I hope you consider running it over in chat gpt.

9mth
Ryuko_453
Ryuko_453Author

hello yes a shameless author review hang me and burn me for my crimes against humanity lol but just kidding I hope your enjoying the story.

9mth
Aayush_storms
Aayush_stormsLv4

Story is to the point and chapters are compact with info which makes story just right. I hope you complete this fic and thanks for the chapters till now.

9mth
leo_adritz
leo_adritzLv10

Has great potential but the reason I am giving 5 stars is becoz unlike other mha ff where the mc knows the plots and straight up kills the villains behind the scenes here the mc does not know much so it feels more natural

9mth
Milykkkkk
MilykkkkkLv1

Not bad add hoping to see more chapters and I hope the ship doesn't ruin the story I recommend Kendo because everyone always forgets about how pretty Kendo

9mth
Solo_yourmain
Solo_yourmainLv1

Just downloaded back this app to look for more MHA fics where the Mc isn't a total lunatic who knows everything. came across this and I'm invested so I'll see where this goes

9mth
SaintCharleyy_UwW
SaintCharleyy_UwWLv1

Nice story I'm liking it hopefully you don't drop it. Also are you gonna be going over the whole manga or just the anime if not please reply to this it would greatly help me out

9mth
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