general rule writing in english is only one character can speak per paragraph, if new character speaking start new paragraph, please use for "speaking" & 'thinking'

The story is quite good and I like it from what I Read till chapter 5, the pacing is done quite well. but you should consider running all the chapters in chat gpt with this prompt: "Add appropriate commas, full stops and correct the grammar mistakes. Revised content only." I know, it's a lot of work. But it's better than this garbled text without any commas and full stops along with grammar mistakes. Please consider doing this. The story is good and I like it, that's why I hope you consider running it over in chat gpt.

hello yes a shameless author review hang me and burn me for my crimes against humanity lol but just kidding I hope your enjoying the story.

Story is to the point and chapters are compact with info which makes story just right. I hope you complete this fic and thanks for the chapters till now.

Has great potential but the reason I am giving 5 stars is becoz unlike other mha ff where the mc knows the plots and straight up kills the villains behind the scenes here the mc does not know much so it feels more natural

Not bad add hoping to see more chapters and I hope the ship doesn't ruin the story I recommend Kendo because everyone always forgets about how pretty Kendo

Just downloaded back this app to look for more MHA fics where the Mc isn't a total lunatic who knows everything. came across this and I'm invested so I'll see where this goes

Has potential to be a good story. Hope to see more!