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Winter_Whisperer
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2024-07-31 03:36

Writing Quality - 5 🌟 No issues for me here Story Development- 4 🌟 It's good but at points could be predictable. Character Design- 5 🌟 In my opinion, this is the highlight of this fic. Updating Stability - 5 🌟 2 chapters a day is fine by me World Background - 4 🌟 It's still in the early stages but I feel like nothing new is being brought to the table. It feels like a generic Naruto fanfic with an MC having some unique abilities. I want to see some character depths and unique backstories. Basically, your spin on the world of Naruto. It's lacking a little in this department for me. At least for the moment. Still, it's 10/10 recommended. Keep up the good work Corn.

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CORNBRINGER
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I'm impressed, that's a very through review. Yeah, your negative points are quite valid, and to be fair I think most of them get tackled on later on. Love the review, and if you ever think it passed enough time since you last review, and want to give me another, please do! With love, Corn.

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