It's still too early to give a concrete critique of the story and its development. But this seems to be the author's first writing. I don't know why the author is describing so much and repeating things, which makes the reading very monotonous and dull. If he reduced some descriptions and didn't repeat as much, or described in a way that wasn't so similar by adding some context along, the text would be more linear, easy, and pleasant to read. Of course, this is just constructive criticism. If you've already finished reading "Yandere Therapy" and want to read something similar, this is a good option. After all, they are very similar.

This novel is quite good. The characters and the story are great so far. I really hope author keeps updating!