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PizzaStopsTime
PizzaStopsTimeLv43mth
2024-08-08 10:08

Story’s just not good. Flow is horrible and dialogue is difficult to understand. Author claims its not a translation but im pretty sure it is with the quality of the story

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Mayank_3884
Mayank_3884Author

Bruh 😐, I am working hard on this story, it is not translated and I am learning grammar I'll update the previous chapters also. since, my first language is not English I am not good at writing in English.

SaintSin
SaintSinLv4

Hold in, so you are INTENTIONALLY writing about a Chinese dude that gets strong by having girls fall in love with him 😮‍💨😵‍💫😅

Mayank_3884:Bruh 😐, I am working hard on this story, it is not translated and I am learning grammar I'll update the previous chapters also. since, my first language is not English I am not good at writing in English.
Mayank_3884
Mayank_3884Author

Well, I have so much chinese novel I just feels weird giving Main character normal' names.

SaintSin:Hold in, so you are INTENTIONALLY writing about a Chinese dude that gets strong by having girls fall in love with him 😮‍💨😵‍💫😅
Pacifist_Warrior
Pacifist_WarriorLv4

Be consistent, you will be able to do many times better in the future

Mayank_3884:Well, I have so much chinese novel I just feels weird giving Main character normal' names.
BoredCrow
BoredCrowLv3

some of these errors include calling the aburame clan the kamizuru and the mc su Lan mf this is a translation

Mayank_3884:Bruh 😐, I am working hard on this story, it is not translated and I am learning grammar I'll update the previous chapters also. since, my first language is not English I am not good at writing in English.
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