Story’s just not good. Flow is horrible and dialogue is difficult to understand. Author claims its not a translation but im pretty sure it is with the quality of the story
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LIKEHold in, so you are INTENTIONALLY writing about a Chinese dude that gets strong by having girls fall in love with him 😮💨😵💫😅
Mayank_3884:Bruh 😐, I am working hard on this story, it is not translated and I am learning grammar I'll update the previous chapters also. since, my first language is not English I am not good at writing in English.
some of these errors include calling the aburame clan the kamizuru and the mc su Lan mf this is a translation
Mayank_3884:Bruh 😐, I am working hard on this story, it is not translated and I am learning grammar I'll update the previous chapters also. since, my first language is not English I am not good at writing in English.