Story’s just not good. Flow is horrible and dialogue is difficult to understand. Author claims its not a translation but im pretty sure it is with the quality of the story

so this is translated? I saw the protagonist's name SuLan. .................................................:.......:........:......:.......:........:.......:..:.:..:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:..:.:.:

A good story with good potential :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

This is a translation and a pretty below average one at that. It’s bad, but not terrible. Dunno why author is claiming that it’s an original novel tho

It's a mediocre translation, you can read it but it's not great, just read the chapters 2 - 4 and you'll see my point. .................................. Needs to redo

this is a translation. badly translated at that. If it gets less cringe and better translation might pick it up.