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DaoistH0qkyJ
DaoistH0qkyJLv48mth
2024-09-18 09:34

biggest bullshit story...MC got into 11 yrs Tony and gets into wizard school...it was 1984...since then everything is like canon... nothing changed...stane kills his parents via Hydra but he doesn't give a shit and gets himself kidnapped like canon... dude he went from 21st century into 1980s..he is genius inventory, a wizard and student of ancient one also so why didn't he try to make his company no 1 in the world..he could've excelled in every industry...he could've taken control of red room...or maybe get into space and visit another planets..but no idiot MC and author just copy pasting canon

I’m a better Tony Stark (MCU) [STOPPED]

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You are only on chapter 7. You just started, things don’t really change until around Iron Man two. You just read where I set things up. I like to show how He gets his powers and the mindset he’s in at the beginning. And if like to ask again if you had knowledge of certain events, would you change it and then everything be a mystery and your advantage disappear? I wouldn’t if I had a possibility of knowing the future.

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Vinsm0k3r
Vinsm0k3rLv4

yeah no, he's a transmigrator with knowledge of what will happen, it is stupid that he did nothing to it, if the whole arc is a waste you should've start with the iron 2, the whole first arc is pointless...

Busy_Driver:You are only on chapter 7. You just started, things don’t really change until around Iron Man two. You just read where I set things up. I like to show how He gets his powers and the mindset he’s in at the beginning. And if like to ask again if you had knowledge of certain events, would you change it and then everything be a mystery and your advantage disappear? I wouldn’t if I had a possibility of knowing the future.
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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5

yea, no point in delving into the early years if one does not use their foreknowledge. With all the advantages he has yet with no changes to the outcome of events, one could argue he is a worse tony stark for still having the same results, which in turn makes the title to the story a lie.

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All in all, it is not that bad. It's a little rushed more or less, it does skip over a lot of details withthecharacters, but it is not bad, and it got me hooked, so I think it did its job good enough. Overall, I do recommend it.

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Now I love this story but I feel like it kinda of was a little rushed at the start of the story but it's a good story might need some touch up here and there but what doesn't.

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