Item: Dragon BAll- Hermit Shen[A Human Story]
Rating: 3.8
Author: ARSENAL_101

ARSENAL_101Lv46mth

2024-09-14 01:27

Here is a quick review of the fic till chapter 19 pros- Good character development, ok story pacing, ok grammar. cons-poor update stability,a bit rushed and lack of explanation and different POVs. nothing much has happened till now so there isn't much else to say. suggestion- POV of the disciples and their training of unique fighting styles would be nice,be ware of increasing the power level of the too much if you don't want an OP MC story else you would needlessly have to raise the power level of the enemy and that never ends well for the story

Dragon BAll- Hermit Shen[A Human Story]

Asu_RA_3122

4.8

53 Chs

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