Item: Dragon BAll- Hermit Shen[A Human Story]
Rating: 5
Author: Sin_3886

Sin_3886Lv25mth

2024-08-15 18:57

I love this fanfic so far, the writing quality is ok, the story is really interesting. i would love see more.

Dragon BAll- Hermit Shen[A Human Story]

Asu_RA_3122

4.8

46 Chs

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Just_ForFunLv5

currently the novel is going great and has an interesting premises not that their are not any human dbz stories but this has a refreshing take on it . such as MC being master shen who is already expirence in martial arts and is an old man , hope it continues like this in the future

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five star just for the idea. it's a goddd darn good idea. I once wrote sth similar.

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