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Theothecolossal
TheothecolossalLv23mth
2024-07-20 02:24

I'd say this is a really good novel so far, the sentence structure is good and the character interactions are authentic and not wooden, I love the dialogue between them its really fun to read! The story doesn't shy from standing out as well, being different yet still standing as a webnovel esc story! You should def read this novel while it's still free! Good job author

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Thank you so much for your kind words and support! I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoyed the characters and their interactions. Your encouragement means a lot to me, and I'm glad the story stands out to you. I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts!

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