Wow, an apocalyptic tale to write home about, I feel like we all wanted to be that oc we made in that one mmorpg from months or maybe even days ago and Finn is living that dream. I only read a bit myself but this book has intrigued me so far, Finn the hero of this story is a prodigy, he adapts fast but isn't plain or boring, he doesn't know everything and he's working hard.

Its a unique Idea a far stray from the typical systems out there its an underrated novel considering it's update stability and the amount of chapters left to us, keep it up author you'll hit big

A great premise, not to boring but not too over the top, its taken well throughout the eleven chapters given and im sure the author is cooking with something. Though that said there is still room for improvement, like in every creative work out there, master your craft and dont give up dear author

THANKS FOR THE PIZZA

ty for the colas! it's a great inspiration!!

yes, please forgive me, i didn't like where the story was going and wanted to do this instead, give it a chance. T-T

"Time often gets the better of an old man like me"- Winslow

"Time often gets to an old man like me"- Winslow

"she wouldn't stop bothering me about taking a photo on her first expedition"- Qifrey Hieheart

"Learning my system the right way"- Aurelia

Interesting story, though at some parts it tells more than it shows, the dialogue are stiff sometimes and a bit long. but the premise makes up a lot for it. Good job author

Sele's first day as a maid ^^

Well-written and articulated, still in it's early phases but everything was well thought out and flows pretty well. Keep it up!

Not much to review on from the first chapter but it's a nice start, the mc is great and confident and the story so far seems promising, though you need to update more often

The cover and the name is amazing, i like names like this, simply adore them XD, the story is also great and the characters are delicately crafted and fits so well with the narrative.

born

he can decide to be a trainer but still has his fear of pokemon which he has to overcome over time while being exposed to them

no- pokemon are like animals you like some your scared of others, he was still scared of pokemon zorua being the closest to a fox a normal animal so he's not as frightened by it

A good story with a great premise and an interesting cast of characters if you like stuff like this i would highly recommend it, the author has a great way with words.

A great captivating story with tons of great characters and world-building, I would totally recommend this book for those who are sleeping on it! keep it up author you have the makings of a top writer.