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AkitoTakahashi
AkitoTakahashiLv47mth
2024-10-02 03:02

While not my cup of team, I read this with a sense of maturity. NJ_Ashart and I are both authors, writers who enjoy helping one another out. As such, I gave their novel a chance to wow me. The premise was simple: Leo and Erwin are forced into a contractual marriage for their own personal gain. Leo's more likeable. Js. I would 100% classify this as NSFW (not safe for work). But, if we look at it from a legit writer's persecutive, we'll notice that NJ does reveal interesting dynamics within the characters and the story. The main flaws I noticed were the stereotypical characterization. I won't say that's bad, but it does pose various risks that may lack emotional depth. Nonetheless, it's clear what the author is trying to convey: Leo is one heck of a... man? Lol.

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That was some deep analysis, just what you'll expect from a fellow Author but still i loved it did't finish it though because i can't afford to pay to unlock chapters.

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TooboLv14

It’s my first Omegaverse book ever and I have to say it was certainly an interesting start. The main thing I want to say is the use of perspective switching, which is the strongest point in the early chapters of the novel. It provides both perception and deception, insight and misrepresentation - it lets the readers gain insight into character’s mind while also restricting their perception of the events at the same time. Because this alternation is done constantly, the readers don’t only get to find out what a character is thinking, but are placed in the position of constantly guessing and imagining what the other character must be thinking right now when the action is taking place. This also creates a constant element of humor as readers know that sometimes things are not what they seem to the character who’s narrating it. Characterization is nicely done within this context, with plenty of contrasts and subversion of expected roles. For example, Leo being an Omega makes for an interesting character as his work life and cold attitude contrasts with his submission in bed, and the same can be said for Erwin the other protagonist. The only thing I would nitpick is ‘language’ category of the review, where there are some obvious typos that stand out. I didn’t mind the first person present form narration with rather simple and direct writing style, but the language department certainly does improve and get more intricate very quickly after a few chapters, for the benefit of the book’s quality. Overall, it was a good start of the book and I would recommend it to anyone to give it a go, even for someone who’s never read anything from this genre. Good work, author-san!

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